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Jack's Couch Poem

Just a little bit rustic, torn up and old bet you can imagine the stories I've told come take you a seat You're in for a treat I'm still soft and comfy, but a little bit bold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/29/2015 10:37:00 PM
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G'day Tim... I envisage you sitting on young Jack's knee while he's pulling the strings and his lips aren't moving. Flows nicely - Lindsay
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John Williams
Date: 4/20/2015 12:49:00 AM
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Hello Tim, Well done Tim, it's a good one. I've got a tale I want to unfold.....kind regards----John
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James Fraser
Date: 4/4/2015 10:23:00 AM
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Different take on the Limerick but I like, way to go Tim, James :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/3/2015 9:34:00 PM
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good one, Tim. And I hope your son watches himself, at least till he is over the age when his insurance rates are gonna hit him so hard with tickets!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/3/2015 6:53:00 PM
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If Jack likes it then I like it. Great execution Tim!
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/2/2015 8:54:00 PM
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wonderful, different from your style of write but just a breath of fresh air. Happy Easter dear friend and don't take all your childrens candy
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/2/2015 11:23:00 PM
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I had to chuckle...they have to hide it from me....Happy Easter Tim
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 4/2/2015 6:49:00 PM
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Oh...you re picking on our dear santa : ),A sweet limerick..Ofcourse He would do his best to answer : )
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/2/2015 6:53:00 PM
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All in good fun Charma...we are talking about his couch not Jack : )
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Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/2/2015 3:57:00 PM
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LOL...poor jack, but he can take it! Nice write!
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/2/2015 4:03:00 PM
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Yes he asked for it...lol
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/2/2015 3:53:00 PM
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great humour Tim:-) hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/2/2015 4:03:00 PM
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Thanks Jan...John added a second part...hugs Tim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/2/2015 3:34:00 PM
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:))) good one, Tim !!! - Hooray for Jack !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/2/2015 3:38:00 PM
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Thanks A-L. He asked for couch poems and I obliged....hugs Tim
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/2/2015 2:29:00 PM
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REALLY GREAT! I christen you Limmertim!!! LOL
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/2/2015 2:32:00 PM
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Thank you sire...lol
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/2/2015 1:29:00 PM
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I like this Limerick, Tim, especially the ease with which it flows. Let's all take a seat next to Jack and hear what he has to say:) // paul
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Tim Smith
Date: 4/2/2015 2:04:00 PM
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Thanks Paul. He always has something interesting to say : )

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