Tim Smith Poet Limerick

Jack's Couch Poem

Just a little bit rustic, torn up and old

 bet you can imagine the stories I've told

come take you a seat

You're in for a treat

I'm still soft and comfy, but a little bit bold

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Lindsay Laurie April 29, 2015 at 10:37 PM G'day Tim... I envisage you sitting on young Jack's knee while he's pulling the strings and his lips aren't moving. Flows nicely - Lindsay

John Williams April 20, 2015 at 12:49 AM Hello Tim, Well done Tim, it's a good one. I've got a tale I want to unfold.....kind regards----John

James Fraser April 4, 2015 at 10:23 AM Different take on the Limerick but I like, way to go Tim, James :)

Andrea Dietrich April 3, 2015 at 9:34 PM good one, Tim. And I hope your son watches himself, at least till he is over the age when his insurance rates are gonna hit him so hard with tickets!!

Maurice Yvonne April 3, 2015 at 6:53 PM If Jack likes it then I like it. Great execution Tim!

Eve Roper April 2, 2015 at 8:54 PM wonderful, different from your style of write but just a breath of fresh air. Happy Easter dear friend and don't take all your childrens candy Tim Smith April 2, 2015 at 11:23 PM I had to chuckle...they have to hide it from me....Happy Easter Tim

Charmaine Chircop April 2, 2015 at 6:49 PM Oh...you re picking on our dear santa : ),A sweet limerick..Ofcourse He would do his best to answer : ) Tim Smith April 2, 2015 at 6:53 PM All in good fun Charma...we are talking about his couch not Jack : )

Jaycee Cervenka April 2, 2015 at 3:57 PM LOL...poor jack, but he can take it! Nice write! Tim Smith April 2, 2015 at 4:03 PM Yes he asked for it...lol

Jan Allison April 2, 2015 at 3:53 PM great humour Tim:-) hugs jan xx Tim Smith April 2, 2015 at 4:03 PM Thanks Jan...John added a second part...hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2015 at 3:34 PM :))) good one, Tim !!! - Hooray for Jack !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith April 2, 2015 at 3:38 PM Thanks A-L. He asked for couch poems and I obliged....hugs Tim

Jack Ellison April 2, 2015 at 2:29 PM REALLY GREAT! I christen you Limmertim!!! LOL Tim Smith April 2, 2015 at 2:32 PM Thank you sire...lol

Paul Callus April 2, 2015 at 1:29 PM I like this Limerick, Tim, especially the ease with which it flows. Let's all take a seat next to Jack and hear what he has to say:) // paul Tim Smith April 2, 2015 at 2:04 PM Thanks Paul. He always has something interesting to say : )