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Jack's Couch Poem

Just a little bit rustic, torn up and old

 bet you can imagine the stories I've told

come take you a seat

You're in for a treat

I'm still soft and comfy, but a little bit bold

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2015

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Lindsay Laurie Date: 4/29/2015 10:37:00 PM G'day Tim... I envisage you sitting on young Jack's knee while he's pulling the strings and his lips aren't moving. Flows nicely - Lindsay Login to Reply

John Williams Date: 4/20/2015 12:49:00 AM Hello Tim, Well done Tim, it's a good one. I've got a tale I want to unfold.....kind regards----John Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 4/4/2015 10:23:00 AM Different take on the Limerick but I like, way to go Tim, James :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/3/2015 9:34:00 PM good one, Tim. And I hope your son watches himself, at least till he is over the age when his insurance rates are gonna hit him so hard with tickets!! Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 4/3/2015 6:53:00 PM If Jack likes it then I like it. Great execution Tim! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/2/2015 8:54:00 PM wonderful, different from your style of write but just a breath of fresh air. Happy Easter dear friend and don't take all your childrens candy Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 4/2/2015 11:23:00 PM I had to chuckle...they have to hide it from me....Happy Easter Tim

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/2/2015 6:49:00 PM Oh...you re picking on our dear santa : ),A sweet limerick..Ofcourse He would do his best to answer : ) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 4/2/2015 6:53:00 PM All in good fun Charma...we are talking about his couch not Jack : )

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 4/2/2015 3:57:00 PM LOL...poor jack, but he can take it! Nice write! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 4/2/2015 4:03:00 PM Yes he asked for it...lol

Jan Allison Date: 4/2/2015 3:53:00 PM great humour Tim:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 4/2/2015 4:03:00 PM Thanks Jan...John added a second part...hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/2/2015 3:34:00 PM :))) good one, Tim !!! - Hooray for Jack !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 4/2/2015 3:38:00 PM Thanks A-L. He asked for couch poems and I obliged....hugs Tim

Jack Ellison Date: 4/2/2015 2:29:00 PM REALLY GREAT! I christen you Limmertim!!! LOL Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 4/2/2015 2:32:00 PM Thank you sire...lol

Paul Callus Date: 4/2/2015 1:29:00 PM I like this Limerick, Tim, especially the ease with which it flows. Let's all take a seat next to Jack and hear what he has to say:) // paul Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 4/2/2015 2:04:00 PM Thanks Paul. He always has something interesting to say : )