Jack's Back!

There once was a pumpkin named Jack,
who gave weaker souls heart attacks!
When whispering "boo......"
he nods "Why yes, YOU!"
And laughs when they fell on their backs!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 11:00 AM
I agree with L'nass, you have the heart of a child and the beautiful soul of a humorous set of humanity.
Shango Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 6:03 AM
This fun poem is such a mirror of your soul, a child at heart, a jovial poet and a kindred of joy.
K. Avatar
November 1, 2010 at 9:50 AM
Well Jack the pumpkin sure is a funny meanie--enjoyed reading this Debbie :) & thanks for my HM in your contest :) sending you soupmail after this :)-- hugs, nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 10:34 AM
GREAT limcrick. I like this one alot. LUv, Andrea
Roberts Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 8:19 AM
cute one for the Halloween theme
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