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Jack's Back!

There once was a pumpkin named Jack, who gave weaker souls heart attacks! When whispering "boo......" he nods "Why yes, YOU!" And laughs when they fell on their backs!

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Date: 11/11/2010 11:00:00 AM
I agree with L'nass, you have the heart of a child and the beautiful soul of a humorous set of humanity.
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Date: 11/5/2010 6:03:00 AM
This fun poem is such a mirror of your soul, a child at heart, a jovial poet and a kindred of joy.
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:50:00 AM
Well Jack the pumpkin sure is a funny meanie--enjoyed reading this Debbie :) & thanks for my HM in your contest :) sending you soupmail after this :)-- hugs, nikko :)
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Date: 10/29/2010 10:34:00 AM
GREAT limcrick. I like this one alot. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/27/2010 8:19:00 AM
cute one for the Halloween theme
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