Jack the Blue-Eyed Peter Cat (Revised)

The pendulum swings
(Left to right)

Zenith approaches
The vortex opens up…

With head spinning
My spin is heading
Towards your light
On the coattails of a watch and chain…

Tumbling down the word hole
Collecting words,
From the wall of air
That surrounds me,
To consume later…

Too much later
As quixotic adventures
Tilt me away from my pen
And images of you burn ever deeper
Onto the backs of my eyelids

Am I losing you?
Am I losing me?
Do I exist?
Did I ever?

It seems I am always risking
My life
My love…

The roulette wheel
Catches my fall…

Still spinning
I follow the white star
Onto the red
Where the tinker rings her bell
Smiling a Cheshire smile
Holding a blue-eyed pill in one hand
And a red-headed pill in the other…

Unblinking
The blue’s stare
Pierces my heart…

The burning flames of the red
Kiss the bleeding desire of my lips
Dissolving on my tongue

I am afraid to open my eyes
But, risking a glance downwards
The insane grin on my mad hat
Slips to cover Dorothy’s red shoes
That Alice stole from Robin
In Sherwood’s green forest

Now I am calm
As I enter your wonderland…

Melding with your mind
Dancing with your spirit
Swaying with your rhythm
Embracing all that you are

I am holding you so tight…

As the tears roll down my cheeks
The pull of never land
Tearing me from your bed of white roses
Back to the thorns on my bed of nails…

As...

(Right to left)
The pendulum swings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Guzzi Avatar
April 6, 2009 at 3:15 PM
Excellent write from a fellow Alice lover! Light & Love
Winter Avatar
April 5, 2009 at 12:35 PM
Congrats dear Nigel on your big win in Christie's contest! Outrageous poetry and so well deserved! Sorry this is late, I am so way behind on the soup! I am thinking of you, and hoping you are ok. Big hugs! Love, Shar xoxo
Jordan Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 11:33 PM
Nigel - Congratulations on placing in Christies contest – God Bless, MJ
Strand Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 8:48 AM
Congrats on your success in Christie's contest Nigel.Rgds Brian
Weber Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Damn, love the word quixotic. Proof of your skills as a wordsmith, sir. Congrats on the Fab Fantasy win! Warm regards, John.
Higgins Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Congrats brother.
Williams Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 9:30 AM
Hello Nigel.... congratulations on your win ! Beautiful poem ....
Esquire Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Dear Nigel.Congratulations on Your win in The Fabulous Fantasy Contest by Cristie Moses A well deserved WIN Superb Write ALWAYS...HG
Richards Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 6:41 AM
So nice to see you here again Nigel! A wonderful winning poem, and Congratulations on having it selected for the top picks in Christie's contest!! :) love, Carrie
Townsend Avatar
April 3, 2009 at 6:00 AM
Great write, a well deserved win. Congratulations! Smiles from Lolita
Guzzi Avatar
December 9, 2008 at 12:29 PM
Loved this, a real roller coaster ride of angst.Try my angst "To be or Not to Be"
G Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 8:12 AM
wow. Very clever poem, like a hypnotism session for a cat? But with surprising passion at the end
Torres Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 7:08 AM
Nigel this is full of passion the ending surprised me but that's how the pendulum swings. Excellent write. This one was very clever and so far my favorite from you. Michael Torres
Wallace Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 6:48 AM
dig it, pure art, great job!
Lakhera Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 2:53 AM
OMG This is Superb Nigel....I love your poems and they get better and better every time i read a new one. Great imagery and wording in this one. You must be one of my favs:) Someday, everything will be happily ended. Always, Chitra
Richards Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 7:19 PM
Your poems get better and better, Nigel! And I believe they get warmer and warmer...with more passion in each one! You should publish all these romantic poems in a book together, ....they are love songs, or lost love songs. As always....your friend, Carrie
Reynolds Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 5:28 PM
I agree with Sharon, you two are heating up the place! Yowza! I can feel the longing in the words, very intense, I hope you get the happy ending. :) Love, Kristin
Loving Iii Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 4:34 PM
good. trip in to wonder land. john
Winter Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 4:05 PM
I don't know Nigel, between you and Christie this soup is getting pretty hot. Wow. This was intense. Deeply passionate and just sorry there is not a happier ending. Yet. : ) Good luck. Love, Shar
Gass Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 2:16 PM
Awsome write! A lot of cleverly phrased lines. Great job Nigel! I love the the line "smiling a Chesire smile" but it's all great. Such deep passion! Love Robin
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