Jack O

the pumpkin blinks not where a cavity darkens — candle extinguished 10/25/2018

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/29/2018 9:19:00 AM

Bam! You've done it again; perfect imagery...I see that candle flame go out.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/29/2018 9:31:00 AM

I appreciate your cheering!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2018 1:44:00 AM

GREAT halloween KU!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2018 4:50:00 AM

Thank you, sweet friend! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/27/2018 9:32:00 PM

The blinking flies below our conscious radar, until your haiku reminds of what we were witnessing---and are now missing. Well-done, Kim! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/28/2018 4:51:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend! :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/27/2018 3:27:00 PM

Something ominous about the phrase 'where a cavity darkens' - perfectly spooky!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2018 5:58:00 PM

Yes...thanks for noticing :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/27/2018 6:45:00 AM

Oh, my goodness! They do BLINK! They do! I am glad you thought of it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/27/2018 5:58:00 PM