Jack Frost

Jack is nimble with his frozen power All the coldness he can shower Crystalizing everything in his path Keenly freezing with an icy laugh From his fingers come frosty chills Rare designs he brings icicle frills Out of the ice he simply transforms Silently decorating windows and doors Then turning it black with his frozen laws © Copyright K.C.Leake 27th November 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2015 5:16:00 PM

Kevin, thank you for replying to my comment on the bottom. How sweet. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 10:18:00 PM

Kevin, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Kevin Leake
Date: 12/26/2015 6:22:00 AM

Merry Christmas Linda, Thanks for such a lovely message, I wish you and your family a merry christmas and a happy new year Best Wishes Kevin

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/28/2015 4:52:00 PM

Nicely done, Kevin. Acrostic, with the added couples and rhyming too! You should enter it! Sandra

Kevin Leake
Date: 11/29/2015 1:38:00 PM

Thanks Sandra, Might do that, thanks for the uplifting comment!! Best Wishes Kevin

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 11/28/2015 7:30:00 AM

Well done Kevin. A super acrostic with flow and couplet rhyming too! Best wishes, Keith 7

Kevin Leake
Date: 11/28/2015 10:13:00 AM

Thanks Keith, I appreciate your kind words!!! Best Wishes Kevin

Jan Allison

Date: 11/27/2015 2:13:00 PM

Lovely imagery Kevin good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kevin Leake
Date: 11/27/2015 2:18:00 PM

Thanks Jan, Glad you enjoyed it!! Best Wishes Kevin

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/27/2015 2:01:00 PM

- Jack Frost is a powerful guy - Lovely poem, Kevin - I wish you a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake
Date: 11/27/2015 2:17:00 PM

Thanks Anne, Glad you liked it!!! Best Wishes Kevin