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Jack Facing a Smack

One day Jill was going uphill. She wanted to make herself chill. Spotted a lucky Robin's quill Jack got in her way and stood still. She waved the quill and tried to spill Jack liked it and hinted his will. Tried to snatch it away from Jill She slugged him on face with much skill. Jack fell down making a loud shrill. Jill got upper hand, what a thrill! PLACE: 4th

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Date: 11/18/2024 2:47:00 AM
Good one, Patri. Congrats on your placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 11/18/2024 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for the compliments.

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