Jack and Jill

Once there was a handsome guy called Jack,
wedded a beauty named Jill, dressed in sack.
they went up the hill
to have a night of hell.
Bloody this Jack and Jill song rhymes fake!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 2:41 AM
Sweet limerick..Gave me giggles: )...Charma
Matose Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 8:14 AM
CREATIVE UNDERTAKER. YOU MADE MY DAY. THANKS FOR SHARING. JM
A   Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 12:44 PM
Hello New Santa C.... The name is witty... Love the Undertaker Poet... Has lots of meaning when thinking of poetry.. LOL... enjoyed the limerick.... LINDA
Makama Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 11:58 AM
very interesting. I enjoyed it.
Onclaud Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 11:12 AM
gigggles!.. you have a funny bone, santa.. got more?.. love this but jill came tumbling down, aha!..:) hggs
Andresen Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 7:50 AM
:)))) fun limerick dear Santa ! - // Anne-Lise :)
Undertaker Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Thanks Anne Lisa. (: ) New Santa.
Mehta Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 4:39 AM
Funny and humorous write,
Undertaker Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 5:18 AM
Thank you Dr.Ram Mehta.(: ) New Santa.
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 11:11 PM
haha, now WHO might you really be??
Undertaker Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 11:43 PM
Andrea i am no Panda but New Santa.(: ) New Santa.
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