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Jack and Jill

. Thud thud thud Crack thud thud bang ow slide Smack bang thud ow Down the hill into the rocks against the trees we fall

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Elton Camp

Date: 11/8/2010 12:58:00 PM

Good job. I wondered how you could write about such a common nursery rhyme effectively, but you did it. Elton Camp

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/8/2009 2:56:00 PM

yes we fall,and then wake up again,who is so perfect not to ever fall-well penned--charma

L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/6/2009 11:17:00 AM

Who has the healing in his wings to pick th ebroken pieces up ... after the situation ... each poem you write is a leverage of thought, and a temptation.

Diane Christian

Date: 4/21/2009 10:59:00 AM

weeeee LOL funny its great God bless from diane