Jack and Jill

JACK  and JILL

                   Jill wearing dress of polyester
                   She is Jack’s nice lovely younger sister.
                            Witty whimsy critic.
                           Just talking sarcastic.
              Looks most funny in puppy-like gesture.
    
  08/01/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 10:13 AM
I have read your humorous short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
Dutta Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 12:12 PM
Thanks for your visit n appreciation. Love
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Congrats on your win.
Dutta Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 12:48 AM
Thanks. Warm Wishes.
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Congrats on your win, Anisha.
Gauthier Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 12:22 AM
Congrats on your win, Anisha.
Messina Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 11:17 AM
Amusing limerick Anisha, congratulations on your win and thank you for entering my contest...Charlie
Kiser Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:59 PM
I can see that little jester with her "puppy-like" face. Quite well done, Anisha.
Dutta Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 12:24 AM
Thanks Kisher. Blessing
Canerdy Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Good one, Anisha! Janice
Dutta Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Thanks Janice. Love
Godwin Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:08 AM
Cute! Had to tell you, wanted to - CayCay
Dutta Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Thanks CayCay. Love
Ajmal Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 3:31 PM
Aww, this is a really nice limerick you have written, I really enjoyed reading it especially the fact that jolly is entertaining jester who is the sister of Jack, lol, anyway I see that it is for the contest, so I wish you best of luck in it, good luck and have a really nice day
Dutta Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Thank you Faraz for your nice comment. Blessing
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