Jack

I saw him on the highway
Thought he was insane
Standing with his thumb out 
In the pouring rain
I don't usually stop for hitchhikers
But something said I should
Besides, it was raining awful hard
And the wind was blowing good.
I said, "Hop in, it's cold out there.
Where you headed on this stormy night?"
He said, "Down the road, I really don't care
Just somewhere else will be all right.
I ain't got no license, so I'm travelling kind of slow
They just left me out of prison a few nights ago."
I might not have stopped had I known
Now we were on this dark road all alone.
I didn't know if I was in any danger
But as I drove, I listened to this stranger
He spoke of life and of acceptance
He spoke of sin and of repentance
A story of gratitude and saving grace
And I saw a smile come on his face.
He asked if I'd take him a little farther down
And drop him off in another town
I was already late but I said okay
And I listened to his stories along the way. 
When he was getting out he said, "Thanks for the hand.
God will bless you. Soon, you'll understand."
There was a new feeling inside me that I found
And I began to turn my life around.
I stopped at the prison to find out about Jack
And tell him how I got my life on track.
The warden listened and he shook his head
Saying, "I have a hard time believing what you said.
It couldn't be Jack, I'm telling you so.
You see, Jack died this day, eighteen years ago."

Angels come in strange forms sometimes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 7/8/2015 9:04:00 PM
a poet of great insight and understanding of the foibles of people you write with tenderness and love Vince awesome poem hugs 7
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Date: 7/26/2009 12:37:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this past week Vince.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/25/2009 2:50:00 PM
O wow Vince, such a beautiful poem and so well written. Congratulations on having this gem featured. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/24/2009 6:58:00 PM
Wonderful feature! what an awesome couplet! Vince! you are the Leader! so much fun to read your art!!! love, jim
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Date: 7/24/2009 6:46:00 AM
wonderful write , you are such a creative,talented poet... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here...congrats on your poem being featured this week. great you Vince! adeleke
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Date: 7/22/2009 11:31:00 PM
this is very good! enjoyed!
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Date: 7/22/2009 7:45:00 PM
WOW! I've read stories, true accounts, about angels in human form helping us. This is the first time I've read one as a poem, and I really like it...bring some more on!
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Date: 7/22/2009 4:03:00 PM
Wow~ Great story my friend just great! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 7/22/2009 2:01:00 PM
congrats on being featured. check out some of my poems
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Date: 7/22/2009 12:35:00 PM
I love your poem! I also like that this is the real life experience of something that happens to a lot of people. A very sweet poem with an awesome flow. Great job.
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Date: 7/22/2009 11:39:00 AM
Wonderful, inspirational poem on several levels. Congratulations on your great poem being featured this week. ~J~
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Date: 7/22/2009 11:37:00 AM
Excellent couplet. I really enjoyed reading this story. Congratulations on being featured this week.
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Date: 7/22/2009 10:06:00 AM
this is my new favorite all time poem. The flow of the poem is flawless.
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:51:00 PM
WoooooooW! Congratulations, but scary one. Ernilando
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Date: 7/20/2009 12:33:00 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
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Date: 7/19/2009 4:02:00 PM
Wow...this read like a Twilight Zone episode, excellent story, and a bit of the unknown still making one wonder. Congratulations on this featured poem, Vince! ~
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Date: 7/19/2009 3:14:00 PM
Im so glad this was featured..its spooky and wonderful to think about. BG
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week Vince, i must say this is a terrific write Sir>>James
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Date: 7/19/2009 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your oldie but still goodie poem being featured this week Vince. Love, Carol
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