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IVORY FLAKES

Assailing my attention attacking with its appeal, alluring... awesome --- Ivory flakes!!! Blanketing pavement and my brain with beauty of blizzard bliss --- Ivory flakes!!! Celestial blessing from God of compassion* comforting with chills challenging my caroler's chants and Christmas card's creativity; oh... crystalline wealth ---Ivory flakes!!! Daydreaming while defying dreariness... delighted am I and desirous to feel --- Ivory flakes
in my winterless country!!!
*Psalms 111:4 He hath made his wonderful works to be remembered: the LORD is gracious and full of compassion. January 25, 2025 4th place, "Jasmine or Flakes" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Ink Empress; judged on 2/4/2025 Honorable Mention, "A JAN 2025 POSTED" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 1/28/2025

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Date: 1/30/2025 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Winter is a pretty time of the year. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
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Date: 1/25/2025 10:23:00 AM
Beata, Very nice Alliteration in white. Great season described in your 'Ivory Flakes'. -Richard
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