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Ivory Flakes

You were never the sunset to me, but always the crimson hue veiling the sun; The subtle shyness in the eyes of a maiden wildly in love with the moonlit boy, her prominent lobster red cheeks when she was a blushing mess under his soothing touch. The sly smile lingering around her lips on her way back home, giggling on the reminiscence of the chocolate discovered under her desk, gifted by her ‘anonymously well known lover’; You kissed the sky, a final adieu while diffusing selflessly into the aqua ocean, deep into the underwater world. I would then dive into the ocean, searching for you, till the ‘deadly piranhas’ whisper into my ear, “She is no more a part of your world”. Maybe then I would weep like a widower but my transparent tears would be washed away by the ‘sun kissed ivory waves’.

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Date: 2/4/2025 7:22:00 AM
Dear AR, this really resonates with me and i felt the emotions and i love how youv used metaphors used creative language to express in such an eloquent manner! Especially the opening lines in this really stood out for me along with “while diffusing selflessly into the aqua ocean, deep into the underwater world. I would then dive into the ocean, searching for you, till the ‘deadly piranhas’ ” such brilliant diction! And the last line left me breathless! I love how youv used the prompt! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for your support
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Date: 1/28/2025 7:32:00 PM
Wowow, this is beautiful!!! :0 I love your use of figurative language
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