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Ivory Flakes

I love watching the snow fall, 
very softly and gently to the ground.
The blanket turns from summer green,
to a blanket of ivory flakes.
Once whiter than white,
now ivory from the soot in the air.
What part do we play,
in this changing world we live in.
For better or for worse,
we all live here together.
Maybe one day the ivory flakes,
will return to the white snow.

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2025

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Beryl Edmonds Date: 2/4/2025 6:08:00 PM Dear Paula, I’m happy to come back with congratulations on your win in Ink’s contest, well done. Enjoy a poetic day… Beryl xx Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/6/2025 11:59:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Ivory Flakes" write again. Great to see you back. It was a fun contest to write in. Fresh snow is so very pretty. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Sotto Poet Date: 2/4/2025 11:07:00 AM Unclean air is affecting the colors that surround us all around the world, therefore you're absolutely right, Paula. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/6/2025 11:56:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Ivory Flakes" write. It was fun to write. Fresh snow is so very pretty. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Ink Empress Date: 2/4/2025 9:21:00 AM Dear paula, this is as always such a sweet and beautiful take on the prompt, i love the flow of your words too! I especially loved “What part do we play, in this changing world we live in. For better or for worse, we all live here together” Congratulations on your win! Thank you for supporting my contest. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/6/2025 11:55:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Ivory Flakes" write. It was fun to write for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it and for my placement. Yes, we all live here together. Fresh snow is so very pretty. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/4/2025 7:58:00 AM "3 Place" Ivory Flakes~Date Written: 1/15/2025~Written By A Human Poet Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/4/2025 5:46:00 AM - Congratulations on your win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/4/2025 7:57:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Ivory Flakes" write again. Always great to see you. Fresh snow is so very pretty. Hugs.... Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Valsa George Date: 1/21/2025 8:22:00 PM A lovely poem on a winter scene. When the snow freshly falls, it will be pure white. Then the color fades into ivory, mostly because of soot and dust. You have handled the subject in a clever way. All the best, dear Paula. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/23/2025 12:22:00 PM Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for All the best. Glad you found my "Ivory Flakes" to be, A lovely poem on a winter scene. The fresh snow is always so pretty to see but gets dirty fast. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Kelly Deschler Date: 1/21/2025 5:22:00 PM A lovely poem, Paula, and very eye opening, as well ... I, too, love watching the snow fall and witnessing the change of seasons from summer to autumn, and then to winter :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/22/2025 12:17:00 PM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my "Ivory Flakes" to be, A lovely poem. The fresh snow is so pretty to see. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Gary Radice Date: 1/21/2025 8:52:00 AM I love the silence that snow brings with it and how it blankets the earth making everything seem as one. Now, if only mankind could follow suit. A lovely free verse Paula that got me thinking about snow, the planet and the human race. Cheers - Gary Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/21/2025 11:22:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Ivory Flakes" write. Great to know my write got you thinking. It is fun when a reader comes alive reading something. Fresh snow is so very pretty. It was a fun one to write. Cheers To You.... Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Tom Woody Date: 1/18/2025 6:00:00 AM Ooh a subtle message about our impact on planet earth. Very nice how you wove that into the theme Paula Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/19/2025 8:39:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Ivory Flakes" write. Fresh snow is so pretty. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Michael Tor Date: 1/17/2025 8:22:00 PM Lovely poem Paula Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/19/2025 8:37:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my "Ivory Flakes" to be a Lovely poem. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Panagiota Romios Date: 1/17/2025 6:23:00 PM Paula., Years ago, there was actually a detergent called ivory flakes. They were iridescent in voloy. I love the way you use them in your poem. Pangie xx Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/19/2025 8:36:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Ivory Flakes" write. Yes, I remember the detergent called ivory flakes from years ago. Guess they stopped making it. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Deb M Date: 1/17/2025 12:54:00 PM Lovely write Paula! Debx Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/19/2025 8:34:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my "Ivory Flakes" to be a Lovely write. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/16/2025 7:55:00 PM Sooty snow reminiscent of newly industrial, smokestack England of the late 19th century. Pell Lou Shan Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/17/2025 10:51:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Ivory Flakes" write. Fresh snow is so pretty. Hope you are OK... Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/16/2025 2:14:00 PM Snow is so pretty but I don't think I would want to live in a place with the problems it presents. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I enjoyed reading it today. Sad when the white snow is tarnished by pollution. Sara K Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/17/2025 10:49:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Ivory Flakes" write. I have lived with & without snow. Fresh snow is so pretty. Dirty snow is a mess. Yes, from pollution, the cars going by & dog mess. Never eat yellow snow. It is from the dogs. Yuk!!! Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/16/2025 8:47:00 AM I'm glad we have no snow in Malta. Not that we don't have dirt around. There are too many houses being built, and many men with their dogs are leaving dogs' dirt behind. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/16/2025 9:47:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Ivory Flakes" write. Fresh snow can be so pretty. Here, people with dogs take small plastic bags so they can pick up their dog's dirt. Everyone is happy. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/16/2025 8:25:00 AM A different perspective on ivory from how I did mine. A lovely write! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/16/2025 9:43:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my "Ivory Flakes" write to be A lovely write. Each writer has their own way of writing. That is a good thing.... Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/16/2025 3:06:00 AM - Beautiful carpet when it's white and clean, Paula - A lovely poem for the contest, best wishes :) - hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/16/2025 7:48:00 AM Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your best wishes. Glad you found my "Ivory Flakes" write to be A lovely poem for the contest. I love to see the white/clean snow. Yes, what a Beautiful carpet it will make. Hugs.... Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/15/2025 9:13:00 AM Yes, first pristine, then unclean, and yet heaven’s snow will be pure…oh how wonderful! Enjoyed! Blessings, Paula! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/15/2025 12:50:00 PM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Ivory Flakes" write. Oh yes, heaven’s snow will be pure. Cannot wait to see it. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

John Read Date: 1/15/2025 7:48:00 AM Hi Paula, I would love to see some snow in London,I do believe global warming is changing things sadly not for the better. xx Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/15/2025 12:48:00 PM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Ivory Flakes" write. I thought London got some snow from time to time. It is so pretty to see. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Beryl Edmonds Date: 1/15/2025 7:43:00 AM Very good Paula, it’s the polluted air that’s changing nature colours everywhere… Beryl Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/15/2025 12:47:00 PM Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my "Ivory Flakes" write to be Very good. I enjoyed writing it. Have a wonderful day as you write away..................

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/15/2025 6:52:00 AM Ivory Flakes~Date Written: 1/15/2025~Written By A Human Poet Login to Reply