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I’ve Run the Border

I’ve run the border. There was a missing piece. A doorway. I must leave it open as I spread the colorful cuts, turning them over. Just like fingering an unopened book, each piece precious in my grip. One day it will be over. A sigh will leave my lips. I will glance over and over at the artistic landscape. Joseph Stella will speak once again to my eyes, like a sip of expensive Cabernet, like the first taste of creamy cheese on a cracker. My dreams take shape with tabs and blanks, interlocking an escape. Will I want to submit to another box? Us humans love to cut things apart and put them back together. Idly, we busy our minds and hands, knowing there’s a meaning, whether in the present, the past or the future. Where do we place our stakes? I remember a puzzle laid out on my grandma’s table. Known, was that my cousin would often stop by and they would work together, spend quiet time, perhaps speaking every now and again. My grandson had me purchase this one-thousand piece monstrosity. No need for me to work too hard, he will be pleased to sit at my table. I went through the pieces twice until I had all of the border, except the door, but as I laid out all the pieces, that elusive door appeared. Euphoric, I move on to the focus feature - merely the heavy red and green foliage near the bottom and arrange the pieces that are alike. We separate - we come back together. Doesn’t a puzzle teach us?

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Date: 1/11/2024 11:51:00 AM
This is excellent. I enjoyed it very much :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2024 3:17:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 1/10/2024 3:27:00 PM
Well solved there Kim, If coffes on can i Drop in? I'll try not to trip over that bush Btw.'
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2024 7:02:00 PM
LOL!
Date: 1/10/2024 9:24:00 AM
Interesting thoughts on a puzzle, Kim. My niece recently visited and laid out the daunting task at hand! I agree with your summation and thoroughly enjoyed your lines!! Happy Wednesday xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2024 11:30:00 AM
It’s going slow. At this point it is just me, so waiting for the fingers of visitors, then perhaps there will be some headway. Happy Wednesday:):)
Date: 1/10/2024 2:31:00 AM
Life is so complex. So you gave us a puzzle to solve. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2024 5:31:00 AM
Love the way you put that, my friend! Thank you!
Date: 1/9/2024 7:41:00 PM
And here I was wondering where on the southern border you had overrun: Texas, New Mexico, Arizona... Sew there!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 8:11:00 PM
You guessed the wrong subject…a bit puzzled…lol
Date: 1/9/2024 4:32:00 PM
I appreciate the layered meanings in your poem. Life is full of riddles and puzzles...we seem to be wired as humans to put things back together...perhaps it's instinct or perhaps its the intrigue? Nonetheless, this was an exquisite creation. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Sara! Us poets take our writing where it goes.
Date: 1/9/2024 3:58:00 PM
Sometimes we find life's missing pieces and realize we had overlooked them before, I enjoyed your story Kim, Very nicely penned
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 8:12:00 PM
So true. Like why didn’t I know that before…
Date: 1/9/2024 2:28:00 PM
Deeper meaning to your poem my friend--than what appears at first glance--putting a puzzle together. We separate - we come back together--that is life!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay! We ponder as we do life.
Date: 1/9/2024 1:49:00 PM
Loved it! Your style, everything..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 2:57:00 PM
Thank you kindly! :) higs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 2:42:00 PM
Thank you kindly! :) higs
Date: 1/9/2024 12:23:00 PM
Yes, a puzzle teaches us. Everyone I have ever seen has one piece missing. LOL..You can look and look and it will not be anywhere. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 12:59:00 PM
Hope that doesn’t happen..lol!
Date: 1/9/2024 11:28:00 AM
I need to do this form, in fact, I think a lot of my poems would come under this form..The poem beautifully captures the cyclical nature of separation and reunion, paralleling the process of working on a puzzle. The acknowledgment that puzzles teach us about separation, coming back together, and the underlying meaning behind our efforts adds depth to the metaphor, inviting readers to reflect on their own lives as intricate puzzles to be solved and appreciated..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 1:01:00 PM
Thank you so much for your detailed comment.
Date: 1/9/2024 10:34:00 AM
Haven't worked on a puzzle for ages... I found it fascinating linking it to the human need " to cut things apart and put them back together." In a sense, that is helpful to discernment - taking Individual pieces of information, understanding each one, and where and how it fits into the "Big Picture." Love the last line.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2024 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Aqua Marine! Really appreciate your comment!

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