I'Ve Not Yet Said Farewell

The hinged door has fallen open
inviting me to kindly step outside -
Death, be not so hurried
to grasp my fragile and wrinkled hand.
You've come for me far too early
so, I must dare to make a few demands.

I've not yet said farewell
to those I've loved and lost, 
nor to those who once loved me -
whose hearts suffered at great cost.
One more time must I take in
the fragrance of magnolia,
feel the wind muss my hair,
and say a final prayer.

Do not pity the gasp of my last breath.
Life was a sampling, simply a test, 
a temporary state of existence
until Death reached with persistence.
I walk slowly to my grave
not taking his cold hand.
Death does not afford me help.

No choir voices do I hear sing,
no celebration ending my life.
Freedom is awaiting me, 
that only Death can bring.
Shed no tears of sadness,
tis for you I mourn and weep.
You must live in this evil world
and I...  I shall merely be asleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Crenshaw Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Beautifully written. Well done.
Lane Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 10:01 PM
Thank you, Kelly.
Turner Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Sometimes I think it would be a welcome change and other times I would rather just get a rain check. The poem does make one think. I like it very much.
Lane Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Thanks, Danny. Rain checks aren't always honored. wink.
Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 5:37 PM
Good one about death and dying..I enjoyed reading it this eve..Sara
Lane Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 6:30 PM
Thanks so much, Sara.
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 5:35 PM
a very moving poem Lin - it resonates with me - I spoke to my aunt yesterday and she said she is ready to 'simply fall asleep' and she no longer wants to go on living - she and her hubby celebrate their 62nd anniversary tomorrow ... I am very worried about both of them their health is not so good:-( hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 6:29 PM
We never like to think about the death of a loved one, but faith in God's Word gives us the hope of the resurrection.
Lane Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 6:29 PM
and Happy Anniversary to the both of them!
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