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I've got a funny feelin' something's bound to begin. Perhaps it's the way you lull me into your wicked allure. Perhaps it's... the way you gaze into my eyes; the softness of your touch, or your luscious kisses! (Yalto) Date written and submitted: 01/26/2020 "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

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Date: 1/26/2020 11:18:00 AM
This lull of wicked allure--sounds so romantic --you are at ease with your form, Edward--beautifully done.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/26/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)
Date: 1/26/2020 10:11:00 AM
Nothing funny about it, my friend. You're clearly hooked.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/26/2020 10:20:00 AM
More like the two in the pic are "hooked" to each other, lol! Thanks the funny visit, Peter:-)

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