Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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I've Got a Funny Feelin'

              I've got a
           funny feelin'
           something's
         bound to begin.
     Perhaps it's the way
           you lull me
                into
          your wicked
               allure.
           Perhaps it's...
           the way you
       gaze into my eyes;
 the softness of your touch,
                  or
     your luscious kisses!


                (Yalto)

Date written and submitted: 01/26/2020

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables

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Vijay Pandit January 26, 2020 at 11:18 AM This lull of wicked allure--sounds so romantic --you are at ease with your form, Edward--beautifully done. Edward Ibeh January 26, 2020 at 11:22 AM Thank you so much, Vijay:-)

Peter Rees January 26, 2020 at 10:11 AM Nothing funny about it, my friend. You're clearly hooked. Edward Ibeh January 26, 2020 at 10:20 AM More like the two in the pic are "hooked" to each other, lol! Thanks the funny visit, Peter:-)