I'Ve Fallen For You

When I first saw you
Six years ago
My eyes are so attractive
My face felt aglow 

But then I come to find out
You were already taking
I didn't know what to think to think
It made me feel unawaken

Years later you haven't been yourself
As I started to talk
To you more often
Had an idea you weren't quite well

I've come to find out
You were hospitalized I'll
And wanted to come visit
But thought she'd be there still

After a month of being ill
We started talking some more
But again you still weren't this same you are tired of always being depressed

One day I came to work in the morning
I saw a car in a wreck
I knew my first instinct it was you (your car)
So right away I had to go check

You were hospitalized ill again
You tell me I could come visit
So I didn't wait not one more second
But still it made me feel so frigid

Then we became friends
One that I really needed
Because for me, there were no others
That I trust it or believe in

For me I think
It was love at first sight
But for you
It just didn't seem right

I kept letting you know
How I feel
And I told you I love you
Like no other, others

When you told me there couldn't
Be a relationship
I just couldn't understand why
Then you tell me it's your own reason why

So I think I've come to accept it
Even though it still hurts me bad
Every time I see you, along with your smile
It melts my heart, and makes me feel sad

But I love the time we spend at work
But I wish time spent, could be more
To end up at your own front door

Cuz there's lots of times
I need a shoulder to cry on
And feel you're the one
That listens to me, that I can rely on

You tell me you don't like
Living in this world
Just thinking of you, not being apart
Of my life no more

So maybe we can get through things together
 Because being around you 
Makes me feel
Like there's just no any other.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 4/10/2018 12:18:00 PM
Oh, this is a really beautifully written poem and an enjoyable one to read, you have describe a true friendship, that what a frienship is, in which there s no formality, no thank you, no sorry, in which the other one is always there to help us, somwone we can rely upon, who says that a girl and boy can t be friends, they can have friendship even better than a relationship but in most cases one or another end up falling in love, a veey warm welcome to ps, I m sure thst you ll enjoy your stay here
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