Its Stellar

Swirling color wheel; Spinning, spinning, oh so fast; A toy built to last. Spinning top in outer space; This old Earth, it has its place. Turning round and round, I see planets, watching me; And I watch them back. Telescopic vision is, Impressive, to say the least. Coordinated, Tops that spin in outer space; Centrifugal force; Keeps them spinning round and round; Never seeming to spin out. Colors on velvet; Gemstones on a black canvas; Distant whirling lights. Majestic beauties, are they; Dervish bodies as they play.
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Date: 9/20/2018 11:03:00 PM
Yes. Spinning will go on forever. Nice coordination of astronomy and poem. Once I got a telescope as gift. But it shows only a better view of Moon. I could not reach stars. in an observatory I watched Jupiter in details. Learnt n taught Applied Mathematics, so have a little bit knowledge on Astronomy.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/21/2018 5:06:00 AM
My scope isn't much stronger than yours but, I love looking at photos on Nasa's website that were taken by Hubble and obsevatories; they're so colorful and inspiring. Thanks so much.
Date: 9/18/2018 5:03:00 PM
Such an interesting perspective! Nicely done, M.L...Makes me want to gaze out there and see what's going on! Best wishes, Gershon
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:16:00 PM
Then grab your telescope and enjoy the wonders of space. Thanks again for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 9/12/2018 3:39:00 PM
This makes me think of a kaleidoscope - magical!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 9/18/2018 7:17:00 PM
That's what it's like when I look at Hubble's photos on NASA's website; very colorful. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 9/12/2018 7:40:00 AM
Out of this world :)) Enjoyed! xomo!
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Date: 9/18/2018 7:17:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it; thanks so much.
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