It's So Hard Not To Love You

It's so hard not to love you

Thinking back on life...
I think of you...
all my desires...
my dreams came true

Your innocence...
kept calling out to me
there was nothing else...
that I could do

Bridge
We were young, just trying to make memories...
with more ups and downs than on a trampoline

Chorus
And so you're gone!...
Now what should I think?
I'm living on the brink,
I'm on the ledge without you...
I can't go on...
It's too hard to go back
the wheels fell off the tracks
It's so hard not to love you!
It's so hard not to love you!

You and me together...
just felt right...
like a hand in glove...
when it was cold

How could you forget...
those tender nights
lying by the fire...
warming our toes

Bridge
We were young, just trying to make memories...
with more ups and downs than on a trampoline

Chorus
And so you're gone!...
Now what should I think?
I'm living on the brink,
I'm on the ledge without you...
I can't go on...
It's too hard to go back
the wheels fell off the tracks
It's so hard not to love you!
It's so hard not to love you!


I never thought that...
things could end this way
we were in love...
in a world so cold

I never thought that you...
could ever stray
our bond can't be broken...
or so I was told

Bridge
We were young, just trying to make memories...
with more ups and downs than on a trampoline

Chorus
And so you're gone!...
Now what should I think?
I'm living on the brink,
I'm on the ledge without you...
I can't go on...
It's too hard to go back
the wheels fell off the tracks
It's so hard not to love you!
It's so hard not to love you!

It's so hard not to love you!
It's so hard not to love you!

repeat and fade

John Derek Hamilton
October 03,2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Your tender lyrics are filled with the most exquisite heartache of lost love, John. Such tender and poignant vulnerable introspection speaks from the depths of a broken heart with painful purity. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. ~Susan
Hamilton Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Thanks Susan
One Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 6:00 AM
I was singing along, lovely lyrics as always.... Congrats on POTD my friend..
Hamilton Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thanks SO nice to see you!
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations on having this great poem honored with POTD John! : )
Hamilton Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Thanks Connie
Mcconnell Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 3:23 AM
Nice one Beata, Congrats on POTD. So very well penned with excellent wording. Gordon
Hamilton Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 12:01 PM
Thanks Gordon, I think you mixed up names, thanks anyways!
Gentile Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Congratulation John on your POTD!!
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Thanks Mike
Sands Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 1:09 PM
This is excellent John. Congratulations for POTD :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Thanks Heidi
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Always a pleasure John, congratulations on your honor...
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Charlie!
Turner Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on POTD John. Keep 'em comin" :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Danny, nice to see you pass by!
Williams Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on POTD John, amazing lyrics.....Maria hugs
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Thanks Maria!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Magnificent song writing John! Translates to music as it's being read, that's talent! Congratulations on a fine POTD! xomo :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thanks for the kind comments Mo!
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 8:54 AM
Love this John. You never fail to amaze with your lyrics.
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your complimentary words and kind visit!
Y. Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Hi John, You such a good song writer. Your lyrics are so relatable and I think that's what makes you an exceptional song writer. I instantly thought of my first love many years ago. Congratulations on getting the song of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:56 AM
Thanks Alexis for the compliment, I want to make people feel something so maybe I accomplished that with this song, nice to have you drop by!
Capitano Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Way to go John you've got another winner here. Congrats on POTD.
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Nice to see you Phil, thanks for the nice comment!
Michael Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 8:01 AM
Love is love and it is what it is...Nice poem...a lot of feelings here inside...Congratulations John D... A good day to you...
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Thanks Arturo
Doll Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on POTD, John.
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Thanks Warren
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 7:18 AM
many congrats on POTD John - you should team up with Greg and get your lyrics recorded!:-) hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Hi Jan, thanks, I have a few songwriters working on 2 more songs of mine. I have a few recorded but can't release any yet.
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Back with congrats John, on poem of the day.
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thanks Vijay
Lindley Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 6:42 AM
Exceptional creation, exceptional lyrics my friend. Huge congratulations on the well deserved POTD honors bestowed!
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thanks for all your support Robert!
Krampe Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Congrats on POTD, John.
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Agnes
Andresen Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 3:47 AM
- A wonderful poem/ song, John :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Warrior Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 2:09 AM
Back to Congrats!!! on this wonderful lyric John Boy!...all the best my friend...enjoy the accolades!...love & song...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:49 AM
John Boy lol now I'm a Walton? thanks WW for all your support!
Mcconnell Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 10:57 AM
Nice piece John, the lyrics remind a bit about of the Beatles, very well penned indeed. Blessings,Gordon
Hamilton Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Thanks Gordon
Warrior Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 7:57 PM
It's hard not to love this lyric, my friend...I really liked this one Johnny Boy...reminds me of my escapades lol...love & songs...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Thanks WW nice to see you!
Wanter Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:39 PM
I'm always fussing about the shallow lyrics i hear in "today's" music. You shut my mouth!
Hamilton Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:55 PM
Thanks SW a good song is a good song, and a lot depends on the lyrics, I agree with you, lyrics generally today are lacking especially in pop music!
Pandit Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:32 PM
A melancholy song that tugs the heart..bittersweet memories..wonder if you sing your own songs or have them put to music, John..you certainly have the talents to write lyrics.
Hamilton Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:53 PM
Thanks Vijay, I don't sing well enough to record my songs so I'm always looking for others to fill in the blanks so to speak, thanks for your positive reviews!
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