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Poetic Form: Quintain (Sicilian)
Inspired: 2024 August 14
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I've lemony kiss, a sour clone circus clown, edges down -- lips stuck heart of stone, maroon, and alone, mouth from cave's depths, bar muddy muck, hands, feet, arms, legs ... their mind's are their own.

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Date: 8/15/2024 9:44:00 AM
Wow, great picture of sadness. A sure winner.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/15/2024 2:48:00 PM
I checked the others--none is long than mines, Andrea wants brief--I'll think on it, thanks Jay. Aloha William
Date: 8/14/2024 8:27:00 PM
A good contender for the contest dear poet.
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Date: 8/14/2024 8:36:00 PM
True, bit wordy for Andrea, (12 syl's) ... thinking "Happiness" of the three, this and the other being "Fear"--I'm just jamiing posting, Aloha William

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