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At last some rain for our thirsty land!

At first dark clouds then a droplet fell. Gathering strength, small puddles appeared and began to swell. It's raining! It's raining! My neighbor joined in my cries. Is it the rain, or tears in my eyes. I reached out my hand as if to grasp the heavenly spigot to make it last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/23/2021 10:42:00 AM
Another uplifting write! Rain replenishes, as do so many of your fine verses. Be well. Brian
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/12/2022 10:34:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brian. I apologize for being so late in replying.
Date: 8/30/2021 8:37:00 AM
Oh, this is so lovely! I can feel your zealous joy!
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Date: 9/3/2021 2:29:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much. I think you really felt my feelings and I'm so grateful :)
Date: 7/16/2021 9:49:00 AM
Anne, I could "feel" the rain out here in our high desert. Thx for your interpretation.. suzanne
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Date: 7/18/2021 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, Suzanne. It rained again this morning! We've been blessed!
Date: 7/15/2021 10:41:00 AM
I love the rainy season... As Mala said below, here in India it's raining in some places... Enjoyed reading Ann and thank you for your visit and comment on my recent poem... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/18/2021 3:08:00 PM
Thank you for your comments, Ani. And I loved your poem!
Date: 7/4/2021 5:33:00 PM
Good question: 'Is it the rain or the tears in my eyes?' -- Maybe a little of each! Happy Fourth of July, Gershon
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Date: 7/21/2021 3:18:00 PM
Thanks for commenting, Gershon. I believe they were tears of joy. It's amazing how so little rain can make the desert bloom.
Date: 6/29/2021 9:12:00 AM
Dear Ann, I love rain, and I love poems about rain. In India, poets write about rain using magical sound-vocabulary, because it rains a lot there. Your poem brought me that ecstatic feeling! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:58:00 PM
Oh, thank you, Mala. I know India has the monsoons. I read a beautiful book about Inda - can't remember the title. Anyhow, it talked about how India put in a pipeline to pipe too much water to places that have too little. Why aren't we that smart?!
Date: 6/27/2021 1:51:00 PM
I am so happy you have finally gotten some rain, Ann. Rain? Tears? Either will do in this situation! Nice writing.
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Ann Peck
Date: 6/27/2021 2:07:00 PM
Thank you, Milton! Of course, one rain won't cure our ills, but it may save some of my bushes :)

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