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Its Raining...

Its Raining… God’s Cleansing Tool Cloud-Concerto… How Cool ! Plop-Plop Plopping into Pothole Pools On the Grass, Pavements and On My Own-Sweet- Fools… who, don’t have Sense enough, to get out of the Rain… … I think I’ll go Join Them… Again Amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/13/2009 12:51:00 PM
Lovely feeling being in the rain, to hear the drops falling on the roof, the windows, just awesome>>James
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Date: 9/11/2009 5:09:00 PM
Fun Fun Fun write MoonBee. What a delightful poem to read today. Thank you for sharing. Love ,Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 4:50:00 PM
Moonbee, what a delightful poem! I love the alliteration and the sounds of the rain plopping and the idea of playing in the rain. A few weeks ago, my husband and I went for a walk and got caught in the rain and instead of running home we took our time - I hadn't been out in the rain like that since I was a child. Thanks for capturing this kind of moment in your poem. Krista
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