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Its Pointless

Now here's a contest that seems pointless But, up to a point, I guess it will do. The points in my life have sometimes been fruitless, I just thought I would point that out to you. Oh, the point of this rhyme May be pointed one way, But it is at this point in time To score points by what I say. The point that I am making, Is that there is always some point That life points in a way forsaking, Giving your point a grave disjoint. I have pointed out many times that points are good and bad. But the good points I remember better Rather than the bad points I have had. You can sometimes see how pointless it is To try to point these things out. As for the point I am making, You get the point...no doubt!

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Date: 1/25/2011 4:13:00 AM
Congrats Daniel on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:27:00 PM
a good result Daniel, good to see the placment.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:23:00 PM
Hi Daniel - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congrats Dan on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this excellent entry my friend... u sure made the point in your awesome lines... enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:46:00 AM
Congrats, Dan. Well deserved win. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Daniel
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Daniel.... Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dan C in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:22:00 AM
I get the point, really good poem:))
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Date: 1/12/2011 2:45:00 PM
enjoyed this pointed piece Daniel.
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Date: 1/12/2011 12:37:00 PM
Oh my goodness.....you have incorporated every way to make your point!!! Just great!!!
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Date: 1/12/2011 11:58:00 AM
This is a good point! Not kidding! I've added this poem to my favorites.
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Date: 1/12/2011 10:58:00 AM
clear, crisp and candid, dan.. hoping for winning slot in the contest... great work here! :) nette
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Date: 1/12/2011 10:39:00 AM
Dan, some interesting points you pointed out in this one ;-) if for the Point contest, good luck with this witty write, love Wilma
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