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It's Over

I wondered in my shallow years how I would know it was time to die. My youth marked it the least of my fears but now I know, I confess with a sigh. There is a bothering in the bones they seem too wear-weary at the core. The mind, too, signals aberrant tones the time is nigh, Reaper’s at the door. Then there is a flickering in the breast like the flame of a candle burning low. The signs read as one: eternal rest. Grudgingly, I conceive it’s time to go. What I wondered in my shallow years my body now exhibits in carnality grim. Leaving behind all I love brings tears Will anyone ask, “What became of him?”

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Date: 8/21/2016 9:52:00 AM
The only certainty in our lives is that one day we are going to die - the final stanza especially the last couplet brought a lump to my throat Paul. Very well written my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/21/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. Your sweetly supportive comments do much to give me the courage to face a blank computer screen. hugs xxx Paul
Date: 8/21/2016 7:29:00 AM
Nice poem about the grim reaper and the grim reality of death Paul!:)
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Date: 8/21/2016 9:51:00 AM
I value and appreciate your thoughtful comment, Cheryl. Certainly, a principal purpose of poetry is to elevate the human spirit. Another function, however, is to deal with mortality honestly and unconditionally. hugs x x x

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