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Fallen--- face down in the dirt, your pale lips kissed the earth a marker will hold your place though the world may forget your face For you it's over... Remember when she said come back--- and then we'll Wed as the nightbirds begin to sing she holds your wedding ring with trembling hands... As your flame begins to dim soon you'll reach the end when your spark of life has fled you'll be counted among the dead For you it's over... Family trees were meant blossom now your spot is but a token as your lines forever broken For you it's over now... Your eyes will never see the pain--- the misery as darkness--- invades the minds of those you've left behind... For them--- it's just begun...

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Date: 2/11/2020 3:32:00 PM
Back with congrats on your POTD, Running Wolves.
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Date: 2/6/2020 2:35:00 PM
Truth spoken in this sad but lush write, congrats on POTD!
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Running Wolves
Date: 2/7/2020 9:25:00 AM
thank you kind Sir.
Date: 1/27/2020 6:25:00 PM
This is absolutely stunning. And the last line is a hammer. You have a wonderful way. Never heard of POTD but you deserve it all, every day.
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Date: 1/27/2020 7:07:00 PM
thank you, but I'm not that good...
Date: 1/23/2020 1:32:00 AM
Hi RW - a masterful piece of poetry, so well crafted with abounding imagination. Congratulations on being awarded POTD. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/23/2020 7:01:00 AM
Thank you it was indeed a wonderful yet shocking surprise to wake up and find P.O.T.D. honors on one of my poems..
Date: 1/20/2020 5:04:00 PM
Great poetry, RW. Love that last line...Congratulations on POTD. All the best, Charlie
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/20/2020 5:38:00 PM
thank you kind Sir
Date: 1/20/2020 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. So very true. You said it beautifully. Have a wonderful day...............
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/20/2020 1:21:00 PM
Thank you very kindly dear poetess
Date: 1/19/2020 10:55:00 PM
Wow what a powerful piece! Many congratulations on your POTD honor Robert. xxoo
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/20/2020 6:38:00 AM
thank you dear Lady
Date: 1/19/2020 10:16:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/19/2020 10:28:00 PM
thank you very much.
Date: 1/19/2020 3:05:00 PM
It is so good seeing your words here in the spotlight. You are a talented writer, honest and sincere. These words touched my heart. Keep being You. Congratulations Robert, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/19/2020 4:03:00 PM
awwww.... thank you((( hugs)))
Date: 1/19/2020 2:56:00 PM
But for YOU...it's Over...Nice one...Congratulations Running Wolves on POTD
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/19/2020 4:02:00 PM
thank you so very kindly, I'm still kind of like are you serious.. lol
Date: 1/19/2020 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 1/19/2020 2:17:00 PM
Thank you dear Lady
Date: 1/19/2020 1:55:00 PM
This one is well deserving of POTD. Just wonderful!
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/19/2020 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, I truly appreciate you
Date: 1/19/2020 1:27:00 PM
so glad to see this one as POTD Robert... back to say congratulations to you... hugs
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Date: 1/19/2020 1:37:00 PM
thank you, you are such a true sweetheart dear Lady
Date: 1/19/2020 1:24:00 PM
- There will always be someone who must suffer ... congratulations on this powerful p.o.t.d. - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/19/2020 1:36:00 PM
thank you so very much
Date: 1/19/2020 11:43:00 AM
An excellent poem - congratulations re: the honor of POTD that has been bestowed upon you Running Wolves. Best regards, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/19/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, I am very much indeed honored..
Date: 1/19/2020 10:29:00 AM
Lovely! You can feel that it is written from personal experience. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/19/2020 10:51:00 AM
Thank you very much and yes it is written from personal experience. but in an effort to make it all inclusive I changed some minor details like "face down in the dirt would have been face down on the deck." and "your pale lips kissed the earth would have been your pale lips kissed lifeless steel." or something to that affect... this was written about an accident on the U.S.S. Nimitz which killed 14 and critically injured 45.
Date: 1/19/2020 9:28:00 AM
A beautiful emotive write my friend...Congrats!! on POTD!!...Happy 2020...all the best from the Wingster ^WW^ :o)
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Date: 1/19/2020 10:08:00 AM
thank you so very much, when I awoke this morning and logged on here, well needless to say I didn't expect to find this poem as P.O.T.D, nor any poem of mine for that matter... I am truly honored and somewhat stunned by this. I thank you and all the wonderful people here on Soup again...
Date: 1/19/2020 8:24:00 AM
A wonderful write! A sad tribute to a dying soul and those left behind.
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/19/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you dear Lady. I wish I could have done better by them all
Date: 1/19/2020 7:47:00 AM
You speak for the fallen eloquently--and tug the hearts of those left behind--congrats on poem of the day!
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Date: 1/19/2020 8:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, I'm truly grateful and honored by this.
Date: 1/19/2020 5:55:00 AM
A very poignant piece RW, many congrats on a very well deserved POTD:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/19/2020 7:03:00 AM
It's so lovely to see a different name on the list rather than ones who get it on an all too regular basis:-) keep up the great work:-) hugs Jan xx
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/19/2020 7:02:00 AM
Thank you very kindly... I'm stunned and Honoured
Date: 1/19/2020 3:56:00 AM
Powerful verse R. W., I could imagine many having those thoughts as they fell in battle. Congrats on P. O. T. D.. Tom.
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Date: 1/19/2020 7:05:00 AM
Thank you Sir... I'm truly honored and feeling like wow
Date: 1/18/2020 9:36:00 PM
Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is sad, tender and emotional- all at the same time. I agree, when it's over for you, it has just begun for them. I wish to save this in my favorites. Sometimes, the heart needs to hold such moments. ~ Brandy
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/19/2020 7:15:00 AM
Thank you so very kindly dear Lady. This poem was inspired by true events from my past and the song the unknown soldier by Jim Morrison and the Doors. was having a bad hair day the day I wrote this
Date: 1/17/2020 6:36:00 PM
wow... this is powerful and very well crafted Robert...i really like this one, it's heartfelt ...one can see the soldier and the sad fate... hugs
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/17/2020 6:39:00 PM
thank you sweet Lady
Date: 1/17/2020 4:50:00 PM
A most poignant poem, Running Wolves. Love it. A FAVE for me.
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/17/2020 5:13:00 PM
Thank you. this is one of the poems I've written about my time in service...

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