It's Not Funny

My Parting Gift.

It’s not Funny

Never leave Life’s bus behind.
It’s full of much that rhymes.

Count only on the adventure.
Even if the need for dentures.

Don’t count on the money honey.
From me it's not funny or coming.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
Hardison Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Thanks much for your comment. I have been a member of poertysoup.com for about a year now. This is my first win. Entered five other contest. I guess one out of five is not bad. Peace, Love and Joy.
Scars Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 7:56 PM
lol! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Hardison Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Thanks Much for your comment. Was not aware of its placement. Thanks. Peace, Love and Joy
Allison Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Made me laugh out loud John good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Hardison Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Thanks much for your comment. My humor sometimes lags or is taken TOO seriously. Old takes safest. Peace, Love and Joy.
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 5:32 PM
haha, that last line is the best!!
Hardison Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 8:13 PM
It's an old type of joke often over played but still funny. Now it's in a poem. Thanks for comment and the haha. Peace, Love and Joy
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