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It's not Funny

My Parting Gift. It’s not Funny Never leave Life’s bus behind. It’s full of much that rhymes. Count only on the adventure. Even if the need for dentures. Don’t count on the money honey. From me it's not funny or coming.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/10/2016 5:20:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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John Hardison
Date: 9/10/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thanks much for your comment. I have been a member of poertysoup.com for about a year now. This is my first win. Entered five other contest. I guess one out of five is not bad. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 9/2/2016 7:56:00 PM
lol! congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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John Hardison
Date: 9/2/2016 10:37:00 PM
Thanks Much for your comment. Was not aware of its placement. Thanks. Peace, Love and Joy
Date: 2/24/2016 8:42:00 AM
Made me laugh out loud John good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Hardison
Date: 9/2/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thanks much for your comment. My humor sometimes lags or is taken TOO seriously. Old takes safest. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 2/23/2016 5:32:00 PM
haha, that last line is the best!!
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John Hardison
Date: 2/23/2016 8:13:00 PM
It's an old type of joke often over played but still funny. Now it's in a poem. Thanks for comment and the haha. Peace, Love and Joy