Its My Life

allo my name is juan and you mite c the spelling is 
horrible on my poem, but u kno ITS MY LIFE
ppl tell meh dont do that, dont do this and my heart screams out...
ITS MY LIFE!!!!
im 15 years old the world waits out there 4 meh 
i wanna live!!!my life to the fullest 
metal guitars art all those things complete me 
i am who i am i will never change for any1
ppl like me, ppl dislike me either way my life is the best
every1 has ups and downs and if you are reading this and you are sad
depressed etc..i have something to tell you, look infront of you
the things that make who you are!!!
y spend time being sad when u can spend time doen something you love 
wrks for me will it for you?
try it i guarantee u wont regret it 
well im pretty mux done this is the last line of this poem but,
not the last line of my life!!!!!!
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Onclaud Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 7:53 PM
ey juan.. a fresh, raw write... you rule! may i know if you are filipino?? thanks..:) huggs
Cruz Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 10:01 PM
Haha nice dang u just slapped me on the face lol!
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