It's My Birthday For Debbie Guzzi

Early this Morning, I was sleeping in my bed. I heard a noise outside my window. I got out of bed half asleep, I walked to the window and looked outside. I saw a lot of little birds flying and carrying on. They soon seperated in bunches - as if they were having a meeting. Then they grouped all together. They were making a lot of noise. One of them came to the window. I asked him - what was going on. He answered - don't you know? Today is Debbie's Birthday and we have to celebrate. I won't tell you how old she is, but today, she becomes wiser. The Angels in heaven are very happy and her family is too- that she made it to this day. We all hope and pray that she will always be as sweet and beautiful as she is today. The little birds left flying and they went to spread the news - that today is your Birthday and we have to celebrate. Happy Birthday Debbie...
09/21/ 2012 writtin by Lucilla M. Carrillo For contest
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October 2, 2012 at 1:50 PM
LUCY,, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
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October 1, 2012 at 3:39 PM
I remember this one. Congrats. WE are all winners with Debs' list!!
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October 1, 2012 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Lucilla. Love, Carol
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October 1, 2012 at 2:18 AM
Congratulations Lucilla xx
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September 30, 2012 at 10:52 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS FRIEND LUCILLA FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)
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September 29, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Oh I love the way you wrote this little bite of a celebration for Debbie,,, you have a blessed day Lucilla ;}
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September 25, 2012 at 10:08 AM
Wow!!! So sweet and wonderful poem for a birthday celebrity! I love it!! I am pretty sure Debs will love your poem too! hugs:) Leonora
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September 24, 2012 at 10:10 AM
lovely this is Lucilla,,
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September 23, 2012 at 12:55 PM
ahhh, that is so sweet!!! Sure Debs will enjoy this. I like the idea of those birds and when you said she became "wiser" Luv, Andrea
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September 23, 2012 at 9:00 AM
a sweet offering for Debbie which she will so enjoy .. a precious tribute Lucilla.. winning wishes to u .. thankxx for blessings for our new baby .. he is adorable luv ..
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September 23, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Very sweet birthdays poems to Debbie, good luck in contest hope you will win Lucilla. Have a wonderful Sunday. - Love oxox Anne-Lise :)
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September 23, 2012 at 8:07 AM
A little birdie told me today is Debbie's birthday. Looks like a good write.
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September 23, 2012 at 7:50 AM
A beautiful dedication to one of Soups best Poets.... LOve it
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September 23, 2012 at 5:31 AM
So sweet of you! As of yesterday night it was the poem..with NO poem on it that got to the contest...you must delete & resubmitt hon Light & Love
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September 23, 2012 at 2:05 AM
Happy birthday Debbie. Lovely poem with beautiful verses. Enjoyed. Tfs
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September 22, 2012 at 9:58 PM
cool entry! good job
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September 22, 2012 at 7:39 PM
What a lovely birthday poem for Debbie. I don't know her but wish her a happy birthday for me too.
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