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It's Just Me and Our Angel

like a warm wrap around my shoulders
this home caresses me in the dead of winter
its silence a persistent weeping of your absence
the gaping void of missing your voice your laughter
and how you would gently call my name

perhaps we were strong but we weren’t alone
throughout the years we had a confidante
who heard the prayers we’d pray
i'd light a candle and silently pour out my heart 
as we combined our strength to fight your cancer
right up that is until we could no longer 

this angel spirit was always by our side
especially as you walked your last mile
so now you’re gone and i’m alone but
our angel stayed behind to walk along with me
and i’m grateful because it’s not been easy

this loyal angel by my bed
holds the candle i light each night
as i open the gate to welcome the memories 
let them surround me and come to life 
as i close my eyes to join you
in the vivid reality of my dreams



AP: 2nd place 2022

Submitted on March 7, 2021 for contest I REMEMBER sponsored by MALABIKA RAY CHOUDHURY  -  RANKED 2ND
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. Angels are the best. Have a blessed day with your angel...................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations on your win. Such a heartfelt poem ~ Mala
Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 1:45 PM
Grief is a weird feeling, for she rears her head at the most unexpected time. I am so glad that you are being taken care of by two angels; one down here.
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:00 PM
Thanks, Caren ~
Ligon Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 7:40 AM
I can sense the comfort in very dark times. Enjoyed your heartfelt poem. Blessings.
Gauthier Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:00 PM
Most appreciated, Juliet ~
Rodrigues Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 7:15 PM
Lovely, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 7:31 PM
Thanks, Kim ~
Hankins Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 7:32 PM
A lovely poem....what more can I say. I can tell you miss your husband so much, and with that I can relate. Encouraging to all who must walk that last mile together. Best wishes in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 9:30 PM
Thanks, Milton. Much appreciated ~
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