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like a warm wrap around my shoulders this home caresses me in the dead of winter its silence a persistent weeping of your absence the gaping void of missing your voice your laughter and how you would gently call my name perhaps we were strong but we weren’t alone throughout the years we had a confidante who heard the prayers we’d pray i'd light a candle and silently pour out my heart as we combined our strength to fight your cancer right up that is until we could no longer this angel spirit was always by our side especially as you walked your last mile so now you’re gone and i’m alone but our angel stayed behind to walk along with me and i’m grateful because it’s not been easy this loyal angel by my bed holds the candle i light each night as i open the gate to welcome the memories let them surround me and come to life as i close my eyes to join you in the vivid reality of my dreams AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on March 7, 2021 for contest I REMEMBER sponsored by MALABIKA RAY CHOUDHURY - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 3/18/2021 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. Angels are the best. Have a blessed day with your angel...................
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Date: 3/17/2021 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Such a heartfelt poem ~ Mala
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Date: 3/11/2021 1:45:00 PM
Grief is a weird feeling, for she rears her head at the most unexpected time. I am so glad that you are being taken care of by two angels; one down here.
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Date: 3/11/2021 6:00:00 PM
Thanks, Caren ~
Date: 3/11/2021 7:40:00 AM
I can sense the comfort in very dark times. Enjoyed your heartfelt poem. Blessings.
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Date: 3/11/2021 6:00:00 PM
Most appreciated, Juliet ~
Date: 3/9/2021 7:15:00 PM
Lovely, Line.
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Date: 3/9/2021 7:31:00 PM
Thanks, Kim ~
Date: 3/7/2021 7:32:00 PM
A lovely poem....what more can I say. I can tell you miss your husband so much, and with that I can relate. Encouraging to all who must walk that last mile together. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 3/7/2021 9:30:00 PM
Thanks, Milton. Much appreciated ~

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