It's Invisible

How could that electric fence fail?
A mad dog’s chomping my tail
Because of this sting
My attorney will bring
An action delivered by mail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Duncan Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 11:02 AM
Well, hello there. How are you? My poem " I Was There Watching" is featured, so I came on here. And I saw your Lemrick just below mine. This is a good one
Beaufort Avatar
May 3, 2026 at 5:14 PM
Hi Debby, what a great pleasure to hear from you!!! I'm not doing badly...just trying to stay healthy and well. This means more visits to MDs than I used to require. I'm thinking how fond I am of your poetry. You have a special sweetness and direct means of communicating good thoughts. Let me know how you are doing and what's new these days. My mom died recently at the age of 103. We made arrangements so that she could live in her house with ourselves and aides taking care of her. It was a lot of work keeping her supplied and cared for. I also am going to several protests a week since I'm not happy about the current state of affairs. My current poetry describes it fairly well. Take care and smile!!! You have some wonderful things going for you!!!
Duncan Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 10:56 PM
good one ,,, is it true though, my two sisters and I were riding our bikes to the park, with animals and horseback riding. Anyway two saint bernards came running out. I did not stop, as my sis said let them get to know your smell. NO THANK YOU ;} age 10 - 11
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April 6, 2013 at 9:06 PM
HILARIOUS! Thanks for making me smile. Always, Laura
Macfarlane Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 4:08 PM
LOL.....can really picture a dog biting your behind...great limerick! Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 2:05 PM
This one really hits the funny spot!
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