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It's How You Look At It ...

“I’m afraid! It’s dark!” “Close your eyes, little sister. You won’t see it then …”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/20/2009 8:43:00 PM
This is very cute, i really like it... Sabrina
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Date: 7/19/2009 7:39:00 PM
I heard that ! What can't be seen,can't be feared. Cute and expressive.
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Date: 7/19/2009 4:36:00 PM
" i can just picture this happening in real life because sometimes when you picture things they come true...
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Date: 7/18/2009 3:47:00 PM
Humorous and cute.
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Date: 7/18/2009 3:27:00 PM
There's a lot of wisdom in this, Frances. Sometimes when we change our perception, things aren't as frightening as they previously seemed. Great senryu, Frances! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/18/2009 2:49:00 PM
Love it . Love the humor. The analogy of it. Sara
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Date: 7/18/2009 2:37:00 PM
Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Nice way to calm another's fear. I liked the conversation style. Have a good weekend. Karen
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