Its Hard To Stay Apart

whn my eys got stuck on u for frst tym...
d whole world has become so full of lyf n i 
ws fine...
dn u hv ur eys on me n it makes dt more 
real...
n i ws sucked by downbeat of people 
hearin of ds deal....
i ws getin crystld by ur aura n pictures...
i ws chkd by evry drama dt ws held for me 
to cut it..
i knw dt people wl laugh at me to c al 
dese apertures..
its hard to stay apart frm u whn i hv to 
admit it...
around d waves u hv made me laugh hard 
n to cherish..
i ws star strucked by ur persona ...which 
hlpd me to escape..
i cnt frgt dt tym whn u hv said my aura a 
home n make me clownish..
i ws cryin hard inside as i ws scared by 
our relation drape..
dn i hv choosen to remain stay apart frm 
u lyk a gesture..
n also whn i heard dt u hv been taken by 
odr girl..
its just hv pushd me towrds my aim bt 
wid more bravure..
i ws standing alone facing wrld wid my 
senses birl..
aftr a long tym whn v saw each odr facing 
badlucks..
i ws drntchd by d situations n laughin at 
our destiny..
nw v r standin lyk an individuals n history 
just shucks...
nw v r enjyin d peace alone n waitin for 
other scrunity...

love pari

if u likd d poem or if didnt ...just put ur 
input wid cmnts....i wud love to observe 
dt..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/24/2013 7:32:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Merry, Merry Christmas To You And Your Family!!! Sara
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Date: 1/8/2014 10:57:00 AM
merry christmas sara...n a vry happy new year...n ya thanx a lot :) :)
Date: 12/20/2013 4:15:00 AM
Fine Parivartana on parivartana of language, Congrats on the win, Namaste
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:56:00 AM
namaste sir...thanx a lot :) :)
Date: 12/19/2013 8:54:00 PM
Parivartana, , Congratulations on your awesome win... always~ LINDA
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:53:00 AM
thanx linda... :) :)
Date: 12/19/2013 6:40:00 PM
The whole world becomes full of life when your eyes met for the first time...very romantic....a beautiful poem...congratulations on this win...
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:52:00 AM
thanx donna ... keep postin :) :)
Date: 12/19/2013 12:07:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem Parivartana in: Relate your poem to one of these quotes, Contest - Sponsored by: Giorgio V. - Nice to participate - and enjoyable to read ALL winning poems! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/8/2014 10:51:00 AM
thanx dear ...:) :)
Date: 12/19/2013 10:16:00 AM
Congrats P. S!
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 1/8/2014 10:50:00 AM
thanks a lot :) :)
Date: 11/20/2013 2:40:00 PM
Very intresting use of language, it made me have to pay attention to what you were saying. I have to admit I liked it a lot. It felt very organic and sexy at the same time.
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Parivartana Singh
Date: 11/22/2013 11:40:00 AM
Thanku richard for ds :) :)..
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