It's hard to Let Go

On Christmas day before he died,
I went home to visit my dad.
The house was full of family, 
our mood was quite somber and sad.

We drifted in and out the room,
where he lay dying in his bed.,
Each of us sharing memories,
saying the words that needed said.

Those last days perhaps the hardest,
as death became reality.
We made the promise to ourselves,
to hold on to his memories.

We were grasping for any hope,
all my brothers, sisters, and me.
We had not yet convinced ourselves,
it was time to let him be free.

Be free to hunt that long coon hunt,
that will never come to an end.
To dance his jig among his friends,
to lie beside his wife again.

Goodbye my beloved father,
in my heart you will always be.
Place a kiss on my mother’s cheek,
and tell her that it is from me.
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Date: 3/14/2024 12:30:00 PM
Hello Jerry Brotherton, Your father will be always in your heart. Watching over you. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 3/9/2024 5:14:00 PM
Love this so. God bless you, friend. love, Gina
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Date: 3/5/2024 8:16:00 AM
I am sorry about the question marks not sure how that happened.
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Date: 3/5/2024 8:12:00 AM
I am sorry about the question marks not sure how that happened.
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Date: 3/2/2024 9:47:00 AM
Touchingly very sad. Nicely done.??
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Date: 2/27/2024 12:22:00 PM
Lovely tribute to your father Jerry, when I got the call from the care home I drove as quick as I could but sadly my father had already passed away. Even when you know it's coming it's still a shock. Tom
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:42:00 PM
Yes, you are right. Fortunately, he spend his final months at home with my sister. So we had the opportunity to see him. Sorry for the loss of your father, and you are right. It is still a shock.
Date: 2/27/2024 11:52:00 AM
Wow Jerry. This is so special. An excellent poem that reaches me deeply. A Fave for me!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:40:00 PM
Thank you my friend for your kind comment and for the fav.
Date: 2/27/2024 12:37:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem and tribute to your dad. It is hard when we loose someone close to us. They always remain in our hearts. Well written.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:38:00 PM
Thank you, Jeanette.
Date: 2/26/2024 9:53:00 PM
A sad poem. In his life, your dad appears to have had a lot of love. Death is hard. This was a good poem of tribute to your father.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Hilda. When we wrote his obituary, he had 15 kids, 57 grandkids, 20 great grandkids and 7 great-great grandkids.
Date: 2/26/2024 8:14:00 PM
You made me cry, doggone it. Great tribute, Jerry. Right into my FAVES. Thanks, Gershon
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:35:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful words and for the fav. Sorry about the tears.
Date: 2/26/2024 7:02:00 PM
If I can be so crass, it's an amazing poem despite the painful letting go. Death is only a human construct. I'll be dancing a jog for him also. Bravo.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:34:00 PM
Thank you Triny.
Date: 2/26/2024 6:45:00 PM
I wasn't present at my fathers death, but I was there before he died. I think I'm suffering the same with mother. And I do not cry the disguise.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 2/28/2024 6:33:00 PM
So sorry for your loss, my friend. Letting go is a hard thing to do.
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