It's Great To Be Alive

Wrinkles and gray hair get me in a rage and I say to myself, “Why don't you act your age!" My poor aching feet remind me to wear sensible shoes but these black stilettos take away the blues. . I wear glasses to see but they're tinted green and make me look cool and mean. I have a million pills to swallow and sometimes I think my head is hollow. I forget my keys, my purse and my coat. Where in the hell did I put that remote? Once I was so limber I could touch my toes but I refuse to talk about my ills and woes. When pouring the tea if my hands shake I simply say, "Another earthquake!" What was I thinking When I bought that new car? My old one was fine. It just couldn’t go far. I’d go on a trip if it weren’t for my hip. Maybe I'll give up drinking. Well, I’ll just take a sip. Okay, I’ll take my pills for all my ills. I’ll take a walk around the block but I will not wear those damn compression socks! Well, I guess I’ll hang in there as long as I can just to see my grands build castles in the sand. I'll exercise each day while in my head I’ll say, “I still feel like I’m only twenty-five. Thank God, it’s great to be alive!” By: Carole O’Terry Duet Copyright: 6/20/2020 “All Rights Reserved”
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Scott Avatar
April 5, 2024 at 11:40 PM
Ah..such is life.. I guess we should all try to age gracefully :)) and grey is the new black. It's somewhat cathartic to read how I am feeling, Carole. May you stay blessed. Sam :)
Callus Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Life is what we make it. Let the inner child free and forget aches and pains....and yes, humour is excellent medicine :)
Goff Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:55 AM
Back again Carole! gosh! I'm 67 Flag Day & every....line of this is accurate!
Goff Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 7:35 PM
Yes! Love it Carole!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:12 AM
This is a fun read. Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment on my latest poem. Hugs Rick.
Miller Avatar
February 3, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Carol I just re-visited your Great to Be Alive write and chuckled all over again. I didn't realize after my first read that you were pretty much covering all of we "seniors". Thanks again for a very enjoyable write. George.
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January 28, 2021 at 4:22 PM
How did I miss this one? This is one of the most enjoyable poems I have ever read on this site!
Carmack Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 10:41 AM
"When pouring the tea if my hands shake I simply say, "Another earthquake!"" LOL.
Spence Sr Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 12:54 AM
This is an excellent post and poem, my sister of God's grace, Carole. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. The descriptive excellence is lovely. The theme great, and tenor move the piece along with much grace. We actually get younger each day. Great job! https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
Dome Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Absolutely brilliant. Fun poem.Very clever. flows like silk. so much talent. Loved it. Well done. pete.
Curtis Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 10:25 AM
I knew of a man who would greet me every time we would meet with " It's a great day to be alive, I sure do miss him. Well done Carole, it's always a pleasure knowing who else is in the boat with me. Take care, make adjustments, and stay young. JTC
Duet Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment JTC. Carole :D
Mcconnell Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 6:45 PM
A really great piece Carole, you tell the reality of life so well and indeed whatever our lot it's great to be alive thanks be to God. You are brilliant writer which I'm so glad to have found and hope to read more of your work. Blessings,Gordon
Duet Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Thank you so much Gordon. I'm not a member any more but I hope to be able to rejoin asap. Staying positive. Carole :D
Babcock Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Ha ha cannot wear those stilettos for sure and this made me chuckle. The joys of aging. love phyl
Duet Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 8:51 PM
I have so many beautiful shoes/heels I'll probably never wear again but I keep them on display anyway. They make me feel...sexy (shhh but don't tell everybody). lol Thanks , Phyl.
Inman Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 6:48 AM
Hi Carole, you made me smile. I read your comment about the stilettos, too bad. Take care of those ankles.
Duet Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 10:02 PM
Hi James! Thank you for reading "It's Great to be Alive" and I'm so glad to have made you smile. By-the-way, I don't really wear stilettos. lol I wish I could though. However, I like to be comfy. Carole :D
Lindley Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 4:15 PM
My friend, I am back again to read this wonderfully inspiring gem. And it truly is-- Great to be alive!! You give us a fine gift with this great creation... God bless
Duet Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 10:05 PM
Hello Dear Robert...thank you so much for your sweet comment and for reading my poem, "It's Great to be Alive" again. Love, Carole :D
Turner Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Sometimes I wonder if death would be considered a reprieve from all of the aches and pains of aging. I did however enjoy reading this humorous poem Carole.
Duet Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 10:24 PM
Dear Danny, I'm glad my poem made you chuckle a little and if I can take it I know you can too. Hang in there! Carole :D
George   Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 12:57 AM
It would appear that you and I, dear Carole...are in same boat. Thanks for making me lol. Elinae
Duet Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 10:19 PM
Hi Elaine! Thanks for reading "It's Good To Be Alive" and I'm glad it made you "lol". Carole :D
Salehi Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 12:12 PM
Nicely done Carole... I have the same number of pills.
Duet Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 10:16 PM
Thanks for reading "It's Good to be Alive", Pashang. Carole :D
Krutsinger Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 8:52 PM
This could have come right out of my head because it is as if you put your hand in my mind and drew my feelings out.
Duet Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 9:57 PM
Well, I guess we all feel that way eventually if we live that long, right? P.S. I don't really wear stilettos. haha Carole :D
Daniel Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 10:41 PM
Ah! Age is catching up, Carole:) humorous way of looking at it:)
Duet Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 1:02 AM
Hi Jo and thanks for reading and commenting on my poem. Can't live without humor. Carole :D
Raven Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 6:10 AM
Hi Carole, this is such a wonderful write. Never change, you definitely have the proper attitude to growing older. I could never tip my toes so I am laughing, mind you, I can't get down as far as I once did. Be happy, whatever age you are. Mind you, in reading, I think i should take more excercise. I love the content of this write Carole. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....MIke. XX. Have to Fav this one.
Duet Avatar
August 6, 2020 at 1:08 AM
Thank you so much, Mike, especially for the Fav. I'm so glad you liked this poem. Carole :D
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 4:15 AM
This is a terrific poem - all jazzy and cute, but better than that, it reminds me to get out there and exercise! I used to LOVE that; I can again. I had forgotten. Blowing you kisses.
Duet Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Backacha, Caren! And, thanks for your nice comment on "It's Great to be Alive". Get out there, girl. Touch those toes. Do those Jumping Jacks. lol Carole :D
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Hello Carole Duet, hi! I see age as a number. Birthdays come and go, ny difference. Because age is just a number. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Duet Avatar
July 15, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Hi Darlene! Thanks for your comment on "It's Great to Be Alive". Yes, I agree. Age is just a number but you know age also does a "number" on us. Carole :D
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June 29, 2020 at 10:55 PM
Oh yes, this poem speaks for so many of us, Wonder when, we can all grow old being 25, or would that in itself cause more problems? love this poem, to my favourites.
Duet Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 11:32 PM
Well, I'm so glad you liked "It's Great to be Alive", Harry. And, thanks for the nice comment. Carole :D
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June 23, 2020 at 6:22 AM
Wowww this is one of your most fantastic poems I enjoyed so much, you fabulously rhyme in about ageing but you do sound admirably young at heart so do wear heels as long as they don't trip you. I was admiring many stanzas ESP the castle in sand and the last. Kudos. Plz pleez do read and comment my newest, a prose and do also read the articles and data I have copy pasted in comment section below the poem so you will confirm the matter further.
Duet Avatar
July 1, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Yes, I love to "rhyme", Zaynab. This was a "fun to write poem" and I'm so glad you liked it. Carole :D
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