Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Etheree

It's Food That I Desire

IT'S FOOD THAT I DESIRE

My peckish belly crumbles thunder loud 
As I smell yummy Beef Wellington  
Oven-fresh serve in silver plate 
In my hand a knife and fork 
I slice the whole in halves 
Scent satiates more 
Tempting! Tickling
my white teeth
to bite.
BITE!
I
Slowly
Savor each
and every bite.
Juices spilling fast.
Homing my hungry mouth.
Silencing my mad stomach.
Done and full, I burp not just once.
"Gracias!" I said, appreciating the food.
Wanting to know and try it too someday...

(c)
10:29 pm
September 15, 2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta October 4, 2014 at 1:52 AM Interesting take, congrats on the win, Olive

Andrea Dietrich October 3, 2014 at 11:31 PM Congrats to my fellow foodie. Ours were the tastiest!!

Faye Gibson October 3, 2014 at 7:57 PM Like this a lot, Olive. Congrats.

Maurice Yvonne October 3, 2014 at 7:51 PM Congratulations on your first place win with this masterful write.

Brenda Meier-Hans October 3, 2014 at 6:26 PM This is so cute. Congratulations on your win Olive.

Jan Allison October 3, 2014 at 6:23 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx

Shadow Hamilton October 3, 2014 at 6:14 PM very seductive pen on food Olive you tease the senses with this lovely poem congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 11, 2015 at 4:27 AM thanks much Shadow.. ~Olive ELoisa =`)

Paul Callus September 21, 2014 at 6:13 AM Enjoyable Etheree; I am now awaiting with anticipation for my sumptuous plate to be served:) I shall make each bite count! Well done! hugs // paul Paul Callus October 4, 2014 at 6:05 AM Congratulations Olive_eloi!!! A merited first place in Shadow's contest:))

Verlena S. Walker September 19, 2014 at 12:22 AM Enjoyable write Olive... Verlena

Andrea Dietrich September 18, 2014 at 10:17 PM ahhh, you and I are on the same wavelength. When I finally post my etheree you will see what I mean!!! a very nice one.

Ma Yaseen September 17, 2014 at 1:11 AM Again a beautiful write from Olive, A influential poet, you prove it always... God bless Friend,,, Malik Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 20, 2014 at 7:31 AM

James Fraser September 16, 2014 at 3:40 PM An Etheree Eatery, yummy it is Olive, James :-P

Jan Allison September 15, 2014 at 2:51 PM Oh I adore Beef Wellington Olive - at New Year I make chicken wellington using chicken breasts - mmm am hungry now - good luck with the contest :-) hungry hugs Jan xxx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 17, 2014 at 12:58 AM Thanks much Jan..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta September 15, 2014 at 9:57 AM Exactly penned Reverse etheree, Olive. good luck in the contest Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 16, 2014 at 12:59 AM Thanks much Dr. Ram.. :D GBU