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It's Food That I Desire

IT'S FOOD THAT I DESIRE My peckish belly crumbles thunder loud As I smell yummy Beef Wellington Oven-fresh serve in silver plate In my hand a knife and fork I slice the whole in halves Scent satiates more Tempting! Tickling my white teeth to bite. BITE! I Slowly Savor each and every bite. Juices spilling fast. Homing my hungry mouth. Silencing my mad stomach. Done and full, I burp not just once. "Gracias!" I said, appreciating the food. Wanting to know and try it too someday... (c) 10:29 pm September 15, 2014

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2014 1:52:00 AM

Interesting take, congrats on the win, Olive

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2014 11:31:00 PM

Congrats to my fellow foodie. Ours were the tastiest!!

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/3/2014 7:57:00 PM

Like this a lot, Olive. Congrats.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/3/2014 7:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win with this masterful write.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/3/2014 6:26:00 PM

This is so cute. Congratulations on your win Olive.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2014 6:23:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 10/3/2014 6:14:00 PM

very seductive pen on food Olive you tease the senses with this lovely poem congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/11/2015 4:27:00 AM

thanks much Shadow.. ~Olive ELoisa =`)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/21/2014 6:13:00 AM

Enjoyable Etheree; I am now awaiting with anticipation for my sumptuous plate to be served:) I shall make each bite count! Well done! hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/4/2014 6:05:00 AM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!!! A merited first place in Shadow's contest:))

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 9/19/2014 12:22:00 AM

Enjoyable write Olive... Verlena

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2014 10:17:00 PM

ahhh, you and I are on the same wavelength. When I finally post my etheree you will see what I mean!!! a very nice one.

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/17/2014 1:11:00 AM

Again a beautiful write from Olive, A influential poet, you prove it always... God bless Friend,,, Malik

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/20/2014 7:31:00 AM

James Fraser

Date: 9/16/2014 3:40:00 PM

An Etheree Eatery, yummy it is Olive, James :-P

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2014 2:51:00 PM

Oh I adore Beef Wellington Olive - at New Year I make chicken wellington using chicken breasts - mmm am hungry now - good luck with the contest :-) hungry hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/17/2014 12:58:00 AM

Thanks much Jan..:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/15/2014 9:57:00 AM

Exactly penned Reverse etheree, Olive. good luck in the contest

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/16/2014 12:59:00 AM

Thanks much Dr. Ram.. :D GBU