It's Done

7/10/12

Everything’s a mess inside Can you emphasize? Can you look into my eyes and say, “It’s okay, Laura. I have felt this way” ? I’ll never understand why I am so diseased This dream is never-ending I need an oasis of pride Before self-degrading lifts its tide My chest is heavy in the sounds Of silence, covering me and feeding Never-ending grieving. . .constantly pleading And others are succeeding. . .beaming I can feel myself in pieces Some of me here—some of me there I don’t think you care, dear Because every time you’re gone I am left here To my boiling, toiling mind To the incessant dripping of the blood The flood of pity overriding Fighting the bastards off—always fighting Never will I watch you be battered Can’t you see I love you? I will not watch them ignore and abhor I will beat them to the core I’m here. . .I am here You are not alone. . .you’re not alone Do not fear But if you want to be on your own It’s done. . . It’s done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/16/2012 6:50:00 PM
I must go for today. I have much work ahead of me this evening. I wish you well. I am 61, and I still feel many of the things you describe. That is why I like your words so much. The grass on the other side is not really that green and everything is a mixed blessing. Since I am a sensitive guy, I sense this all the time. You seem to have a great take on life--you have portrayed how tough it is--when one is sensitive to so much. Anyway--talk to you another day hopefully!
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:50:00 PM
I must go for today. I have much work ahead of me this evening. I wish you well. I am 61, and I still feel many of the things you describe. That is why I like your words so much. The grass on the other side is not really that green and everything is a mixed blessing. Since I am a sensitive guy, I sense this all the time. You seem to have a great take on life--you have portrayed how tough it is--when one is sensitive to so much. Anyway--talk to you another day hopefully!
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