It's Cold Here

It's cold here.

It was cold long before
Winter arrived
harsh frigid stares
as people passed by
subtle cues
to warn us off
send us packing
"This is not your neighborhood-
you are not welcome here."
their unspoken message
loud and clear

It's cold here.

Winds of change
blew too fast
too strong for some
to adjust
and bone-chillingly cold
breezes emanate from
these people
who got left behind
their decades of disappointment
and bitter envy
mingle like freezing rain
and sub-zero winds
into a deadly wintry mix
designed to drive us out

It's cold here.

Wind chill fifty degrees below zero
miserably, dangerously cold
so cold that
for a few days
Hell freezes over
and people act like
neighbors
for a change

And I wonder about
the hateful old man
who used to stagger
up and down the street
every day, cockeyed
never saying a word
except one time
he asked if I
had a spare dollar
and got angry
when I didn't

So cold here.

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Date: 2/6/2019 5:16:00 PM
Positively deathly cold; love this: "for a few days Hell freezes over and people act like neighbors for a change"; the things it takes to get people away from the television and computers. Chilly Pen.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/6/2019 5:22:00 PM
Thanks so much! ;) Yes, it does take a bit to bring out the humanity these days....
Date: 2/4/2019 4:15:00 PM
a pleasure to read this remarkable write with touches of symbolism...well done!...huggs
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/5/2019 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ;) *hugs*
Date: 2/1/2019 7:23:00 PM
Rhona, I love this one. I am taking this more about emotions of people than temperatures, but I gather it's about BOTH.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/2/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thanks! You got my meaning exactly!! ;)
Date: 1/31/2019 1:30:00 PM
Love does not keep one warm en route to the outhouse, so be thankful for walls! Aloha! Rico
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/31/2019 2:15:00 PM
I am grateful, believe me! ;D hahaha Aloha!
Date: 1/31/2019 1:27:00 PM
I feel lucky my highs are at least in the double digits - this write so eloquent, especially like 'and bitter envy/mingle like freezing rain' so well done!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/31/2019 2:18:00 PM
Yes, I think the lowest temperature I'd ever seen in the South was in the teens... so this was definitely an adjustment! ...And thank you so much for the compliment! ;)
Date: 1/30/2019 9:19:00 PM
I am sending you all the warmth I can from the tundra that is surrounding Kansas City today. Which is not a whole lot of warmth. It is amazing how fast people will get angry the first time they are nice, and you see through their niceness for what it is. Well written indeed.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/31/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, my dear! Even Kansas City temperatures would feel warm at this point, as I'm anxiously looking forward to a high of 1 degree today! ;)
Date: 1/30/2019 7:21:00 PM
Excellent, Rhona! Yes, people change temporarily for a common cause. Favorite!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/30/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, I'm honored! ;)
Date: 1/30/2019 7:17:00 PM
It sounds like your in dire need of some warmth, yes its cold these days, keep the fire burning and the poetry flowing. have a nice evening Rhona
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/30/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thank you for your very kind comment! ;)
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