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It's Cold Here

It's cold here. It was cold long before Winter arrived harsh frigid stares as people passed by subtle cues to warn us off send us packing "This is not your neighborhood- you are not welcome here." their unspoken message loud and clear It's cold here. Winds of change blew too fast too strong for some to adjust and bone-chillingly cold breezes emanate from these people who got left behind their decades of disappointment and bitter envy mingle like freezing rain and sub-zero winds into a deadly wintry mix designed to drive us out It's cold here. Wind chill fifty degrees below zero miserably, dangerously cold so cold that for a few days Hell freezes over and people act like neighbors for a change And I wonder about the hateful old man who used to stagger up and down the street every day, cockeyed never saying a word except one time he asked if I had a spare dollar and got angry when I didn't So cold here.

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Date: 2/6/2019 5:16:00 PM
Positively deathly cold; love this: "for a few days Hell freezes over and people act like neighbors for a change"; the things it takes to get people away from the television and computers. Chilly Pen.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/6/2019 5:22:00 PM
Thanks so much! ;) Yes, it does take a bit to bring out the humanity these days....
Date: 2/4/2019 4:15:00 PM
a pleasure to read this remarkable write with touches of symbolism...well done!...huggs
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/5/2019 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ;) *hugs*
Date: 2/1/2019 7:23:00 PM
Rhona, I love this one. I am taking this more about emotions of people than temperatures, but I gather it's about BOTH.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 2/2/2019 4:19:00 PM
Thanks! You got my meaning exactly!! ;)
Date: 1/31/2019 1:30:00 PM
Love does not keep one warm en route to the outhouse, so be thankful for walls! Aloha! Rico
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/31/2019 2:15:00 PM
I am grateful, believe me! ;D hahaha Aloha!
Date: 1/31/2019 1:27:00 PM
I feel lucky my highs are at least in the double digits - this write so eloquent, especially like 'and bitter envy/mingle like freezing rain' so well done!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/31/2019 2:18:00 PM
Yes, I think the lowest temperature I'd ever seen in the South was in the teens... so this was definitely an adjustment! ...And thank you so much for the compliment! ;)
Date: 1/30/2019 9:19:00 PM
I am sending you all the warmth I can from the tundra that is surrounding Kansas City today. Which is not a whole lot of warmth. It is amazing how fast people will get angry the first time they are nice, and you see through their niceness for what it is. Well written indeed.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/31/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thank you, my dear! Even Kansas City temperatures would feel warm at this point, as I'm anxiously looking forward to a high of 1 degree today! ;)
Date: 1/30/2019 7:21:00 PM
Excellent, Rhona! Yes, people change temporarily for a common cause. Favorite!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/30/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, I'm honored! ;)
Date: 1/30/2019 7:17:00 PM
It sounds like your in dire need of some warmth, yes its cold these days, keep the fire burning and the poetry flowing. have a nice evening Rhona
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 1/30/2019 7:49:00 PM
Thank you for your very kind comment! ;)

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