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It's Been a While

There is no real redemption unless it’s given without a drop of deserving. You came to me with the same face as before, but your hair had turned white. What were you asking me for? My being, dust and shell, you still strong and vibrant; what could I possibly give you? You wanted to know the truth about life’s path and loss along the way. What could I tell you except what had happened, and that now I was nothing in front of your beautiful face that still saw something in me? February 4, 2019 Premiere III - Open Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/9/2019 12:59:00 AM
I wish I could write free verse so well,Rita. I'm pretty lost without rhythm and rhyme but this was so well expressed. Congratulations for your success in Rob's contest.
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/9/2019 8:19:00 AM
Thank you, Wendy!
Date: 2/9/2019 12:07:00 AM
Glad to see you return to my contests. Congrats and thanks.
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 2/9/2019 8:19:00 AM
Thank you, Rob! It's good to be back!

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