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It's beautiful

The moon reflected off the ocean, so bright and so real I spun around on my toes, with my face looking at the stars, The cool breeze lightly touching my face Wearing just my summer dress, The beautiful melody of song, in the Back round touched my heart Everything was a dream, a fairytale I put my hand to the blue moon light ocean and put the droplets of sea salt on my face the smell was amazing, everything nature had to offer, It gave it to me, just for that one night I looked to the sky one more time The moon reflected off the ocean, so bright and so real

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/25/2012 2:04:00 PM
beautiful imagery it hugs the mind and spins me right there to be at ur side as you see the moon reflecting--- Edwaard
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Date: 1/19/2012 11:58:00 AM
Sarah Very beautifully written.... sometimes nature offers us the most wonderful moments in life, And that feeling is all that we have in us share.....
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Date: 1/12/2012 3:03:00 AM
Sarah..a mystical enchantment..lovely...Valerie
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Date: 1/11/2012 11:13:00 AM
Sarah it IS beautiful,yes ....a fairytal,a dream,lovely :)oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/9/2012 12:29:00 PM
What a great picture.........George
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Date: 1/8/2012 6:46:00 PM
Love this enchanting sonnet Sarah. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/8/2012 2:38:00 PM
Awesome imagery
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Date: 1/8/2012 7:56:00 AM
lovely images cool and breezy filled with a night sky reflected off of water- lovely, Couldn't ask for anything more, Thank you for sharing, Brenda : )
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