It's Amazing

It's amazing to find yourself
Lost in a maze of emotion
It's curious to be found
Hanging upside-down
Not knowing which way is up
And therefore always falling on your face
It's incredible to see 
How something simple
Can grip you passionately
Can clench you like sand
Held in a fist, so it slowly trickles out
Until there's nothing left of it
And it leaves you drained
It's astonishing to comprehend 
That some things always were
Some things simply are
And yet others will carry on
This is none of those
It is terminal, fleeting
It lasts as long as I entertain it
Try and grasp the sand
But it slides through my fingers
Leaving emptiness
Loneliness
A longing to belong
It's amazing...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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April 2, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Chantelle Bliss, nice imagery. LINDA
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August 11, 2015 at 6:00 PM
Chantelle,,, this is a good read, thanks for sharing..... **SKAT**
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