Its All About Me

I want to say sorry
For being remiss
I tend to worry
As I look at the list
Of the appointments I 
Have to
Keep, every week.
I get such care for the
Cures that I seek.
Everything is fading
And it seems far away.
I have glaucoma
Diabetes as well,
Three types of Arthritis
That hurts like hell.
I see a heart specialist,
And lung specialists, too and
Peripheral Neuropathists to name 
Just a few,
IBS that messes with my tum
I no longer have control
Of my bum.
I go to physio classes,
Twice a week.
I have a hoarse voice,
I cough and wheeze when I speak.
I am not writing this for sympathy
Life has been very good to me
I don't know how to explain
In any other way
What I started to say
I have had so much encouragement from PS
It has caused much happiness
I have become very slow
And have lost my get-up and go
So without further ado
I want to apologise to all of you
Who have kindly taken the time
To comment on my simple rhyme
And I have yet to answer you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 7/3/2023 8:49:00 PM
All I can say is, hang in there... and you certainly need not apologize to me. Your responses to me are in near-virtual time! The body may be weak, but your spirit is willing, Shirley! Keep writing! Thanks and hugs, Gershon
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Date: 7/1/2023 1:31:00 AM
So many illnesses and issues. I have my share, not as much as yours but my heart condition could be the death of me. If I'm to die, let it come quickly. Your poem is stunning. Despite its sadness, I loved it.
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Date: 6/30/2023 11:15:00 PM
You are truly a beautiful human being Shirley! Im sorry you have so much health stuff going on and its taking its toll. I always feel sad when l know how much you are dealing with! I love your poetry as you know! Sending all my love, kindness and cuddles! Debx
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Date: 6/30/2023 10:45:00 PM
Always enjoy reading your posts. Yes, things get difficult over the years. A good poem. Take care.
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