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Poetic Form: Senryu/Shape
Inspired: 2024 January 13
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the small tree how much a buck~here's a buck I will pick it up next year
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ | _____________________________ |/ \|/ AFTETR CHRISTMAS LIVE | \|/ \|// TREE LOT SALE | \\|// \\|/// SPECIAL | \\|/// \\\|/// _____________$50.00__________| \ \|// / \ \|//// | | | | \\ \|//// \ \\\|///// | | | | \\\\\|////// \ \\\|////// \\\\\\|/////// \\\\\|////// \\\\\\\\|//////// \\\\\|/////// \\\\\\|////// \\\|///// \\\\|/// \\|// \|/ V \|/ | \|/ | | V |

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Date: 1/13/2024 4:07:00 PM
now this is truly clever! I enjoyed it as well as the tree shapes you created. I appreciate your creativity. enjoy your Saturday evening, Sara
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Date: 1/13/2024 4:30:00 PM
A sense of levity in a brewery of metaphorical sobriety, Sara. Aloha, William

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