It's a Wonderful Pie

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I love all these movies, so I couldn't leave any of them out. I also included one of my favorites. Inspired by Gomer Pie-el ...lol

While eating my lunch...at the SANTA PIE restaurant 
BABIES IN PIELAND...were sitting next to me and my aunt 
We were telling them stories...like HOW THE PIE STOLE CHRISTMAS 
And how the PIE-RATES of the Caribbean is a movie...not to miss 
The WIZARD OF PIE...had his hands full of flour 
When the PIE HARD Hawaiian...had burnt and went sour 
So they threw out the pie, and they served me some lox 
As I listened to THE PIES OF MUSIC...play on the juke-box 
So the moral of the story...PIE ACTUALLY is 
GONE WITH THE PIE...oh my, gee whiz 


Punny Holiday Pies Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Michele Faulkner 
11-24-2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/17/2018 4:38:00 PM
CONGRATS, Charles! Janice
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/18/2018 5:32:00 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Date: 12/17/2018 12:13:00 PM
Charles, kudos on your top win! A very clever poem :) ~Mark
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/18/2018 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Date: 12/16/2018 9:36:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Charles. Well done.
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/18/2018 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 12/16/2018 4:39:00 PM
Congrats on first place, Charles! Very punny!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/18/2018 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Kim :)
Date: 12/16/2018 4:18:00 PM
Extra pie helpings for getting all the titles in the poem - excellent! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Charles Messina
Date: 12/18/2018 5:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michele. I am truly humbled to see my poem atop the winners list. It was a fun contest...All the best...Charlie :)
Date: 11/24/2018 10:14:00 PM
Excellent! Couldn't figure out what to do with this contest myself. You sure did! This is terrific. G.L. Should do very well. ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/24/2018 9:00:00 PM
Wow you really got into the spirit of the mood, Charlie. Bravo!
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Date: 11/24/2018 7:46:00 PM
A fun, fabulous poem, Charlieku. You never fail to charm a smile out of me.. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you my dear friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/24/2018 6:57:00 PM
very very cute. I think the contest sponsor will love it.
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Date: 11/24/2018 4:12:00 PM
LOL Great one ! Fun and funny :)
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