It's a girl

“It's a girl!”
The female form, the rounded edges
 that soothe and nurture
Shaped and created by gentle hands 
to fit a shoulder under a heavy arm 
Beast of burden
I was formed this way and 
now I am bruised and soft
 from the many blows life has landed upon me
As ages pass,we continue to strive 
to be seen for who we truly are, 
not just the labels fixed to our mandatory name badges: “GIRL”, “WEAK”, “EMOTIONAL”, "WIFE", " MOTHER"
We are all of these and so much more. 
We are none of these and that's ok. 
they forget about yesterday 
when the world held our bond and sewed our lips
When our bodies were public domain... were or are?
Will they repeat injustices because they've forgotten?
The world watches us for signs of inadequacies 

Do they ever dread the color red?
Or, worse, do they ever pray for it?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:27 PM
my favorite line is: ' The female form, the rounded edges that soothe and nurture. ' yes, we women are so much more; thankfully, cultural and societal changes have increased the awareness of our potential. I know some, though, that still think that we women should be 'controlled.' sigh
Horne Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 3:39 AM
thoughtful & thought-provoking write here
Woods Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 6:25 AM
How could a writer ask for more? I thank you so much! Xo
Nicole Avatar
July 15, 2025 at 7:30 PM
' The female form, the rounded edges that soothe and nurture. ' So beautifully expressed and so true. Mankind has made changes to what God created. Frowned upon by Him, for sure. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
Woods Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 6:25 AM
Your sentiments are gratefully heard, thank you! Bless you too Brandy. Xo
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 12:22 AM
A feminist poem. So powerful, Crystol. Very well expressed.
Woods Avatar
July 14, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Oh tysm Andrea! I'm so glad it's come across to a fellow female as powerful. I'm just so disgusted sometimes with the way this world is taking backwards steps with equality and justice. Erg. Xo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 2:52 PM
Shaped and created by gentle hands to fit a shoulder under a heavy arm…how lovely a couple fits together when black and blue are just the sky in day & the stars at night. Beautifully we fit when loved upon. Phew…a write to think upon.
Woods Avatar
July 13, 2025 at 5:38 PM
What a lovely sentence! "... when black and blue are just the sky in day and the stars at night" beautiful Kim!! Yes much to think on. Xoxo
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