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It's a girl

“It's a girl!” The female form, the rounded edges that soothe and nurture Shaped and created by gentle hands to fit a shoulder under a heavy arm Beast of burden I was formed this way and now I am bruised and soft from the many blows life has landed upon me As ages pass,we continue to strive to be seen for who we truly are, not just the labels fixed to our mandatory name badges: “GIRL”, “WEAK”, “EMOTIONAL”, "WIFE", " MOTHER" We are all of these and so much more. We are none of these and that's ok. they forget about yesterday when the world held our bond and sewed our lips When our bodies were public domain... were or are? Will they repeat injustices because they've forgotten? The world watches us for signs of inadequacies Do they ever dread the color red? Or, worse, do they ever pray for it?

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Date: 7/16/2025 3:39:00 AM
thoughtful & thought-provoking write here
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/16/2025 6:25:00 AM
How could a writer ask for more? I thank you so much! Xo
Date: 7/15/2025 7:30:00 PM
' The female form, the rounded edges that soothe and nurture. ' So beautifully expressed and so true. Mankind has made changes to what God created. Frowned upon by Him, for sure. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/16/2025 6:25:00 AM
Your sentiments are gratefully heard, thank you! Bless you too Brandy. Xo
Date: 7/14/2025 5:24:00 AM
Imagine Adam's awe at seeing the first woman. Those of us with godly sensibilities still see a good woman the same way. As for Satan's world, it's a hot mess. Fascinating poem Crys
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/14/2025 6:15:00 AM
Amen. A stinky hot mess lol. I'll take fascinating any day of the week! Thank you! Xo
Date: 7/14/2025 12:22:00 AM
A feminist poem. So powerful, Crystol. Very well expressed.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/14/2025 6:17:00 AM
Oh tysm Andrea! I'm so glad it's come across to a fellow female as powerful. I'm just so disgusted sometimes with the way this world is taking backwards steps with equality and justice. Erg. Xo
Date: 7/13/2025 2:52:00 PM
Shaped and created by gentle hands to fit a shoulder under a heavy arm…how lovely a couple fits together when black and blue are just the sky in day & the stars at night. Beautifully we fit when loved upon. Phew…a write to think upon.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/13/2025 5:38:00 PM
What a lovely sentence! "... when black and blue are just the sky in day and the stars at night" beautiful Kim!! Yes much to think on. Xoxo

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