It's a Beautiful World

On a rough jagged rock, I sit
   high above a waterfall
whose roar is loud...yet soothing
it pours upon the large rocks below
   in a violent rush
mushrooming up,  bubbling mists of rain
that are carried by the wind
   caressing my skin
the day's twilight sheen
   casts a dim light and a sense of serenity
I watch the sunset sweep across the horizon
   in a vibrantly painted wash of colors
taking me on a quiet journey
   of wondrous dreamy thoughts...that beckon my soul
to a beautiful world of expansive scenery
the red of the evening sky is the perfect dress
       with ruffles of yellow,  to end the day
the last flicker of light vanishes
and the night drapes its darkness
   over the shoulder of twilight
comforting the majestic splendor of sunset
in a black cape of luminous stars
            welcoming the rise of the moon's crowning light
   to illuminate the waterfall
in a soft luster...taking center stage
allowing shades and shadows to form in silence
moving slowly across the landscape
   filling my eyes,  my soul,  with peace and tranquility
   as I whisper...yes,   it's a beautiful world
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La France Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Frederic, love your poem, congratulations on your win in my contest, I enjoyed your poem a lot, well done, like the music also, Constance
Rodgers Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 7:39 AM
Dear Frederic, After reading this several times I think you have done an amazing job showing the transformative power of nature and how immersion in a stunning landscape can lead to "wondrous dreamy thoughts" and a journey for the soul. I particularly loved your word imageries. Each line brings justice by portraying nature as a source of comfort and inspiration that is capable of filling one's eyes and soul "with peace and tranquility." I have always greatly appreciated the world's natural beauty and its capacity to bring peace and wonder to those who take the time to observe and connect with it. – Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Parker Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Daniel, I wish I could find a place like the one I described
Kauffman Avatar
July 25, 2024 at 11:56 AM
Oh so visceral, Frederic! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!
Parker Avatar
July 26, 2024 at 10:23 AM
thank you Sam
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