It Would Be Nice

IT WOULD BE NICE

Click heels and choose?   Ok  It would be nice if 
I could  be in the house of my son when he’s my age
And celebrate how he’s succeeded better than me
And see him happy with his life’s progress
And see him happy with his wife  -  like me
With his own grown-up children. . . .
Yes, I’d  like to be there when his ship has finally come in to port.

I’d like to know did he ever really understand or know me?
Does he remember me like I remember my mum?
Does he miss me or wish he could see me?
Does he ever talk to his children about me?

Yes, it would be nice ; but  I would much prefer to be 
There when he’s in difficulty and has nowhere to turn; 
When he’s down to the last gasping penny;
When no one listens, and all are too busy.

To help avoid the accident, not to help after it;
To see around the corner ahead of him
Before he stumbles on the path;
To remove the broken glass before he treads.

To be a useful part of the process; not a decorative
Addition to a final  celebration.
Rounds of applause and flash-cameras  hold 
No interest for me. My preferred spot 
Is between him and trouble, and when that job is done, 
Send me  quickly to the next job.

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Written by Sydney Peck  for 	

Michael J. Falotico's Contest "Close your eyes and click your heels"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 1, 2011 at 9:01 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I am happy I was able to read your wonderful poetry today Syd. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
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