It will come to you

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I wish I could stir the passion in your heart
somehow wake your dormant Muse
make you see that beauty's everywhere
that you just need to stretch-reach out to it

I wish I could convince you to meet it half way
to step out of your comfort zone
and spend a bit of time in nature
you might discover that it's addictive

I wish I could inspire
stir what's waiting in your heart
my advice is give it time it's churning
until it will soon be effervescing



AP: 1st place 2025

Submitted on March 25, 2025 to contest YOUR CHOICE E sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  Honorable Mention

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Margaret Foster

Date: 3/27/2025 5:10:00 PM

Such encouraging words in this poem. Line. just what I needed to hear for I confess I am somewhat struggling. Thank you. Congratulations on being chosen among the winners. Cheers

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2025 6:56:00 AM

Ah, thank you Margaret ~ I'm sending you positive vibes ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2025 2:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Very creative. Way to go. Sara K

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2025 6:56:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sara ~

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/24/2025 10:31:00 AM

Dear Line, so true! Your poem is so beautifully and tenderly expressed. I love the imagery of your last two lines, they are especially inspiring. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2025 2:30:00 PM

Thank you very much Susan ~ most appreciated