It Wasnt Enough

You give her your heart
She says it's not enough
You give her your soul
She says it will never be
You give her your inter being
She screams
Saying is that all I'm worth
You give her the world
Like atlas you carry it
She says you disgust her
She is a queen
That needs more
And more

Then you bring her the universe
She looks at you
With eyes full of rage
Then you stop
Tired of being the slave
Who dreams to be a king

You gave up on
The makeshift queen
She crys
And humiliates you
Telling the universes
That you where nothing
An insult to men

Then you *sigh*
Curising yourself
 for loving a women
Who has no love

Then you hear the her voice
She has respect for you
So you give her your heart
She says nothing
You give her your soul
She says nothing
You give her your inter being
She says nothing
You carry your world on your shoulders
Begging god for a response
From your queen

She sits and gazes at you
With eyes as beautiful as a full moon
Lips as soft as the clouds themselves
She says ....
You my king no my pharaoh
You have gained my love
When you gave me your heart
My respect when you
gave me your soul
My life when
you surrender yourself to me
And my undying devotion
When you made me your world

You stop
You are loved
You found your queen
That recognize you as a king

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/9/2016 11:02:00 PM
Kevin Goodrum, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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