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It Was One of Those Mornings

Alarm clock blaring I smell it from bed Dog’s rear exploded Got into the trash Dang mutt needs diapers Dog nailed the cat Both need a bath Can’t use the hose Seven below Scrub them down They sure fight Brown tub ring It’s up My nose Poop. Lazy weekend morn Kids bounce on our bed Pouncing from above Bundles of giggles Tickle spots abound Pancake souffle Steam from oven Bacon, syrup One too many Gather up Hop on bikes Burn it off! Don’t need Much lunch Nap. 3/19/16 Contest: It was one of those mornings (11th place) Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Date: 3/25/2016 6:01:00 AM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 3/24/2016 10:31:00 AM
Hi Ton, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/24/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Vlad!
Date: 3/23/2016 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement! :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/23/2016 6:07:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 3/20/2016 1:40:00 PM
this one is FANTASTIC . I love it.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/20/2016 9:04:00 PM
Thanks! It was fun. :-)
Date: 3/20/2016 7:41:00 AM
I'm not sure how I'd deal with the poop up the nose. It all sounds wonderful. The trappings of a young family. Really nice Tom. Good luck in contest, this should do well. Peace my friend:)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/20/2016 9:05:00 PM
Only a slight exaggeration with the poop thing...thanks!
Date: 3/20/2016 5:45:00 AM
This had me smiling :) funny! good job <3
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/20/2016 6:01:00 AM
Thanks, Kimberly!
Date: 3/20/2016 3:06:00 AM
A really terrific entry Tom! I did mine wrong and guess i could my title and maybe no one will notice GL in the contest.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/20/2016 6:01:00 AM
Thanks, Connie!
Date: 3/19/2016 10:16:00 PM
I need a nap after reading that adventurous lazy morning.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 3/19/2016 10:20:00 PM
:-) Thx Tim!

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