Sienna Ethylpen Poet Rhyme

It Was One of Those Mornings

It was a morning that began like any other,
until I got the call about my dying mother.
I hurried home, drove so fast.
Before I got there, she had passed.

It was a morning that began like any other,
I knew she was free and no longer had to suffer.
I awoke with a smile on my face,
knowing that she was in a better place.

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Eve Roper March 25, 2016 at 8:34 PM Congratulations on your win, Sienna!

Sara Kendrick March 24, 2016 at 9:16 AM Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..It is very difficult to deal with the emotion of the death of a parent..It is good that you knew that she had gone on to heaven and was free of pain.. Sienna Ethylpen March 25, 2016 at 7:38 AM Thank you Sara for reading and for your kind words and encouragement.

Vladislav Raven March 23, 2016 at 10:26 PM Hi Sienna, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad. Sienna Ethylpen March 25, 2016 at 7:37 AM Hi Vlad! Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words :)

Susan Gentry March 23, 2016 at 3:53 PM Congratulations on your placement. I really could relate to this as I recently lost my mom. Excellent. A 7 and a fave. :) Sienna Ethylpen March 25, 2016 at 7:36 AM Hi Susan. I appreciate your kind words. I hope you are healing from the loss of your mother. It's a process. Keep your head up.