It Was One of Those Mornings

It was a morning that began like any other,
until I got the call about my dying mother.
I hurried home, drove so fast.
Before I got there, she had passed.

It was a morning that began like any other,
I knew she was free and no longer had to suffer.
I awoke with a smile on my face,
knowing that she was in a better place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 3/25/2016 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sienna!
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Date: 3/24/2016 9:16:00 AM
Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..It is very difficult to deal with the emotion of the death of a parent..It is good that you knew that she had gone on to heaven and was free of pain..
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Date: 3/25/2016 7:38:00 AM
Thank you Sara for reading and for your kind words and encouragement.
Date: 3/23/2016 10:26:00 PM
Hi Sienna, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/25/2016 7:37:00 AM
Hi Vlad! Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words :)
Date: 3/23/2016 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. I really could relate to this as I recently lost my mom. Excellent. A 7 and a fave. :)
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Sienna Ethylpen
Date: 3/25/2016 7:36:00 AM
Hi Susan. I appreciate your kind words. I hope you are healing from the loss of your mother. It's a process. Keep your head up.
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